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18.11.11 ► Yulo-chan ● it's a CRITical HIT ! p: Goto Page: [] [<] 1 2

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Yulo-chan

PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:35 am
Okie you can post now c:  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:20 am
Lovely color composition. The detailing on the hair and top is gorgeous.
And THOSE EYES. emotion_kirakira

The thing that's most eyecatching are the pants. It seems..hard. That is, have a fixed shape akin to victorian bustles that legs suddenly spring out from. The folds in the cloth doesn't match where the legs are coming out from.

The background - love the idea, though the typical sumi-e style have a more varied brush stroke - thinner flowers, varying thickness and the sort.
Example1 Example2  

lea florens

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Yulo-chan

PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:01 am
Lea Florens
Lovely color composition. The detailing on the hair and top is gorgeous.
And THOSE EYES. emotion_kirakira

The thing that's most eyecatching are the pants. It seems..hard. That is, have a fixed shape akin to victorian bustles that legs suddenly spring out from. The folds in the cloth doesn't match where the legs are coming out from.

The background - love the idea, though the typical sumi-e style have a more varied brush stroke - thinner flowers, varying thickness and the sort.
Example1 Example2


Aww thank you emotion_kirakira

LOLYEAH the pants are really fail OTL But I don't know what they are lmao
Here's the reference I had OTL

o0o0o0o sumi-e style * U * I'll try to make it resemble that then heart  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:08 am
Yulo-chan


Aww thank you emotion_kirakira

LOLYEAH the pants are really fail OTL But I don't know what they are lmao
Here's the reference I had OTL

o0o0o0o sumi-e style * U * I'll try to make it resemble that then heart


I think you did a good job with the reference. hahaha

Not sure what the original artist wanted as well.
My bet is on a petticoat. Could be something like this? Or this?  

lea florens

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