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A Man of Krieg.

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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:47 pm


	This is the fanfic I am working on right now called A Man of Krieg. Chapter three is being made as we speak (or, as I type). Please, tell me what you think of it.

Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 4:23 pm


	I'm a bit confused by the setting. There's not much description of where they are at, or why, or what's going on other than the inner-family turmoil.

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Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 6:38 pm


	Did you read just the prologue or do you just not understand the universe?

Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:54 am


	No need to be rude young man. If this takes place on Krieg or has to do with those iconic guardsmen, you might want to read up on them with Imperial Armour 5 through 7 and Dead Men Walking to get the gist of how the work and where they come from.

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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 8:41 pm


	The Telling Truth Did you read just the prologue or do you just not understand the universe? I read all three chapters, albeit quickly. The dialogue is strong, but I don't have a very good idea of what exactly is going on in the world around the main characters.