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Sipika Liefed - Yellow blood [Crit?]

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Wind Vestal

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:21 pm
==> Sipika: Type up quest form.


Name: Sikipa Liefed (Based on Archer of Heart, which I totally know is a lame theme but whatever xD)

Blood colour: #C3CA18

Gender: Female

Symbol: Here!

Personality: A sweet girl, Sikipa tends to cling to friends. She is a social butterfly, and regrets the fact that her hive is located in a secluded forest. Sikipa is very, very optimistic. She is facinated by almost everything, and likes to learn. Sipika is proud to be a yellowblood, and displays her color prominently in items she owns and her clothing. Deep down she strives to be one of the cool kids, cool gadgets and awesome hives, so she surrounds herself with friends in hopes that one of them will lead her to the fabulous life of coolkidness. She is slightly kind of maybe obsessed with troll children and their lusii, and has been ever since she recieved Turtlemom as a lusus. Seeing all of the wrigglers being chosen by their lusii stirred that curious love for the psycology of lusii and why they choose who they do. She is a bit clueless when it comes to romance, and you'll end up having to spell it out for her if you wanna take her out on a date. Sipika loves comedies, and is a bit giggly, laughing even at things which are not as funny as others might think, but are funny to her. She has an entire room full of books and large sheets of paper where she records her observations on lusii, most of which look incredibly complex and scientific considering her usual mental capacity.

Strengths: •Good with a bow and arrow. Sipika is known to hunt tailbeasts and wingbeasts, and eats them at the ends of weeks as little celebrations of living another week.
•Sipika is also unusually caring for a troll, and loves all of her friends unconditionally. It doesn't matter how much you insult, yell, or plead with her. She is your loving pal forever. Of course, if you ever took the time to try to actually make her hate you, you would quickly find that any of the more obvious jabs at her work with lusii will infuriate her. It's one of the only things she will ever actually dislike someone for, and could quickly turn your friendship with her into a rivalry.
•Sipika is really, really, really good at organizing things. This is why her observations on lusii are so scientific looking. The rooms that are furnished are all organized by things such as alphabetical order, where they would be on the hemospectrum according to their color, etc. As a result, her Hive is very, very neat, save for her room, which is less so because she keeps more of a controlled chaos thing going in there. It's still pretty neat though.
Flaws: •Tends to cling to people she knows, which could make some trolls uncomfortable. She WILL be your friend if you meet her, and you have no say in the matter whatsoever. She will constantly bother you, all with good intentions of course, but she is pretty annoying if she likes you.
•She could be described as a bit obsessive, and will literally create shrines to things she enjoys(i mean, what is she gonna do with all those extra rooms?).
•Sipika is kind of inexperienced at communicating with other trolls. She often comes off as slightly stupid, but doesn't really notice the fact that some of her friends might think she's dumber than the average moobeast. Not that she would really care, however as awkward as she is it's not hard for her to understand the more scientific side of Alternian culture.

Weapon: Arrowkind! Sipika uses a bow she scavenged from a blueblood's empty hive when she was younger. She makes her own arrows out of branches from the trees, wingbeast feathers, and sharpened stones. The bow is decorated with her blood color.

Appearance: Sipika's wardrobe consists mostly of her yellow blood color and black/grey. Her clothes are mostly taken from the deserted hives of other culled trolls, but occasionally she will make herself a jacket out of animal skins(this is the only time she will kill anything larger than a meowbeast, and she does give the beast a proper funeral high in a tree, where she places flowers around the beast's head to honor it, like Turtlemom told her to). Sipika is able to dye these jackets to a color very close to her blood color using a primitive berry dye, which after years of testing she has almost perfected the recipe for, and looks very close to her blood color(she keeps the failed atempts in the back of her closet as extras in case she needs an emergency shirt/jacket/pair of pants. never know when you need spare clothes, Turtlemom has taught her well). Her hair is long and messy, and her bangs fall over her face. She wears chunky glasses, becase she likes them, not because she needs them. Her lips and eyelashes are ever so slightly tinted yellow, and her horns are somewhat short, and curve down into little sharp hooks, mimicking the top of her symbol. Sipika has quite a few scars on her hands, because of the thick brambles that surround the northwest area of her hive, which she needs to cut back regularly or else they cover the hive.

Hive: Sipika's hive is secluded, deep in a forest. It is small, but has many, many rooms, most of which are empty. The walls are all painted different colors, giving the hive a cheery feel. Her recuperacoon is tall, but not completely supported correctly, so it leans on a wall. Sipika's bedroom towers over her hive, and is supported by three smaller rooms which resemble stilts. Her bedroom is triangular, and the least orderly room in her hive, in fact it is kind of messy. (I'mma expand this section soon. Can. Not. Think!)

Power: None(not anymore at least, lololololol)  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:24 pm
Your name is SIKIPA LIEFED.

You have a variety of INTRESTS, which somehow work their way into the design of your HIVE. You are somewhat OBSESSED with LUSI, and the walls of your hive are completely covered in DRAWINGS of LUSI AND THEIR OWNERS. You REGRET your decision to have your hive built in a FOREST, but you are TOO OPTIMISTIC TO REALLY CARE. You like to make PLUSH MONSTERS, and they are scattered around your room. Your room is messy, but you are TOO DAMN CHEERY TO CARE.

Your lusus is BIGGER THAN YOU ARE, and it likes to eat the leaves off of trees. Luckily you live in a FOREST, and it has ALOT TO EAT. Sometimes you like to RIDE IT. You call it TURTLEMOM. It is NOT PARTICULARALY GOOD at caring for you, but you are TOO GODDAMN HAPPY TO CARE.

You are an AVID FLARPER, but you are NOT PARTICULARALY GOOD AT IT. You like REALLY LONG MOVIES and have SEVERAL EMPTY ROOMS that you have NO USE FOR.

Your trolltag is turtleCaller, and you have a rælly CLINGY sort of way of spæking.

What will you do?

==> Sipika: Type up quest form.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:45 pm
Just a note, form in first post, extra in any other posts.
Just as well, is there a not blown-up-pixelated version of the base sprite? It's rather unruly on the eyes!

You spelled 'long' wrong when talking about her hair and... I feel like you should go more in depth with her strength and weaknesses. Nice, but clingy is rather vague. Is there anything AT ALL that is a hindrance/strength? surely her nearsightedness in a hindrance? I just feel like you should expand her character more because right now she's a little flat. Nice, clingly, good with bows.... Add some dynamics in there! biggrin Is there anyone she DOESN'T like? Is she a hopeless romantic? Is there a reason she uses bows? What does she like to learn about? Why does she have an obsession with Lusii? Who does she Flarp with? Does living in a secluded forest hinder her in anyway? Expand, expand! biggrin

Also, you should add some of the info in your yellow block of text to your form to make her sound less flat. O:
I like her though biggrin
Interesting idea to being obsessed with children and their Lusii.  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:55 pm
Aesceus
Just a note, form in first post, extra in any other posts.
Just as well, is there a not blown-up-pixelated version of the base sprite? It's rather unruly on the eyes!

You spelled 'long' wrong when talking about her hair and... I feel like you should go more in depth with her strength and weaknesses. Nice, but clingy is rather vague. Is there anything AT ALL that is a hindrance/strength? surely her nearsightedness in a hindrance? I just feel like you should expand her character more because right now she's a little flat. Nice, clingly, good with bows.... Add some dynamics in there! biggrin Is there anyone she DOESN'T like? Is she a hopeless romantic? Is there a reason she uses bows? What does she like to learn about? Does living in a secluded forest hinder her in anyway? Expand, expand! biggrin


Thanks ^^;; Fixed the post order. And... no xD The original version was REALLY tiny, so I posted the bigger one. I'll fix it when I'm on my Mac, currently I'm on my laptop which explains the lack of spell-check as well.

You also bring up some good points! I'll take these into consideration and make her charater a little more three dimensional :33 Right now is kind of... A beta version, so to speak(you can see my notes kind of strewn around the form, I plan to fix those areas).

Also, Sipika isn't actually short sighted xD She wears her glasses because she likes them("She wears chunky glasses, becase she likes them, not because she needs them") ^^;;  

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:59 pm
So they're not prescription, and just glass?? If you wear prescription glasses without the need to, you can really damage your eyes O:

It's all good! :3 Character development is the funnest part!  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:07 pm
Just glass :33

For you, maybe! xD I personally HATE character development, the RP is the fun part!

*goes to hop on the Mac*

EDIT: So I'm gonna wait until a mod crits this to make changes :3 Do it all in one update, yeh?  

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Mriae

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:49 pm
Hey Tekk.

You seem to have a good start so far on what you want your troll to be like, so that's very good.

From the way things look now, however, Sikipa still needs some work. Mostly in regards to her personality and her strengths & weaknesses. I can get a grasp of what you want her to be like, but I don't really get a good feel for her, if that makes sense. Mostly, when looking at this, all you really need to do is expand on things that you have so we get to learn about her more in-depth.

For example, does she cling to everyone? Or does she cling to just her friends. If she clings to everyone, even random strangers, they might definitely be weirded out that some troll they don't know is suddenly grabbing on to them. I'd also go into more detail on how she is obsessive (what she obsesses over, and why, for instance), and how she is strange. If you think about it, everyone is strange in their own little way, so how does this set Sikipa apart?

Basically, just work on her some more and flesh things out. It's a good way for us to really get to know the quest character that you have in your head. ^^
 
PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:20 pm
UPDATE!!

Okay, I added a buttload of stuff about Sipika to her personality and added some flaws(well, I mostly elaborated on some, but w/e). I also changed her horns because i think that the new pointy ones are a bit better, and gave her a power. I'm going to go ahead and say that this is ready for Beta vers 1.2, so crit away!  

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Wind Vestal

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:29 pm
Added the new symbol and alot more about her wardrobe, some stuff about how her Lusus teaches her to act(a very small amount :V), and a bit about how she feels towards her blood color.

CRIT AWAY!  
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:08 am
CRIT TIME!!

[Smart vs Not smart]
The fact that she likes to learn but isnt smart, but also has some heavy duty scientific facts and methods written down about Lusii doesn't translate very well. You cant be very complex but still remain slow and stupid. I know you stated 'not very smart' but I think she should be smart and instead other trolls have the illusion of her being stupid because of her peppy, happy ways! Especially if she is going about giggling to herself most trolls would consider her a nut case! And even if she doesnt pick up on conversations that doesn't mean she not smart just social awkward! You can be the smartest person in the world but unable to start a decent conversation people would be interested in. Plus if she always has things running through her mind than she is bound to miss key points in a conversation again making it seem like she is stupid when she's not! Also because she has taken such an interest in the nature of Lusii means she has to have patience, understanding and a thirst (which you have put) for knowledge. She suits being a smart person rather than not smart.

[Friends Forever]
I would like to know what would really hurt/piss off Sikipa. I know she will be your BFF for all time but even the most upbeat person have weaknesses and someone will find it. She can't be immune to everything someone says or there would be conflict or depth to RP's. More than happy for her to be ultra happy but she still needs to have other feelings even if she doesn't show them very often!


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Everything else works well! Just a**/change/edit these bits and we shall see her accepted in no time!!! <3 ]
 

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Wind Vestal

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:44 pm
Updated!

[changelog]
•Added to "Unusually Caring" - Strength
•Changed "Inexperienced with Communications" - Flaw
 
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:17 am
A little bit more crit!

Good with a bow & Arrow: This needs to be changed to either good agility/concentration/aim etc because if there was a time when she didn't have her bow and arrow that strength would become obsolete! Its fine her being amazing at that weapon but it shouldn't define a strength for a troll and shouldn't be easily removed! Having patience to aim right or being incredibly solid (I dont know the term for not shaking XD!) when using the bow and arrow is something that can't be taken away easily....unless crippled. You see its a mind game XD!

Maybe a bit more information about her hive location? Usually trolls and their Lusus choose where to build there hives together. So even though she regrets it now why was she drawn to the forest in the first place? To hunt animals, scenery etc.
 

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