Ryo Skylight's Sketchbook

[Ryo Skylight]

Ok I assume I am doin this right.. This is where I will put art for critique.

My style: Anime, fiddles around with different styles,
Experience: Drawing I, Drawing II, and one Figure Drawing class (Figure drawing class got cut in half because of very poor weather so I am not where I need to be at all..)

I will start posting art for people to critique.

monkey king sketch

Ryo

Avi Art

avi art 2  

[A t r o c i t y]

monkey king sketch :
sketch the hands in. everything else look fine. ^^
maybe even add in his weapon

Ryo:
Depending on what direction you intended to draw him its either his head or upper torso that is off. If the direction of his upper body was the direction you intended, try drawing the head in the same axis as the spinal cord. however, if the direction you intended was in the same direction as the face, then the torso would be twisted a bit in a weird perspective, so, fixing the head would be your best bet. not bad though ^^

Avi Art:
Looks good to me! But maybe have her holding the pipe instead of it just floating there :3

Avi Art 2:
Everything is good, but the hands bother me.... because they're EMPTY!
Add something in or change the positioning of her hands 3nodding
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Overall not bad at all!