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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 6:36 pm
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Pandiecakes x--w a s a b ii--x Nikky-Elf I am guessing it is too late to enter? When was the new date? I mean there wasnt a new date it ended when march did but look on the bright side there's always the next contest razz that I may host ^^ I'm just a really harsh judge is all razz I take it you have an idea then?
yep yep razz
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:00 pm
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Sorren Mishima My Post for Jack and the Beanstalk, I was reading the contest when I was listening to "This is Halloween - Marylin Manson", and it just clicked in my head, so I thought this may be a theme good enough for a twisted Jack and the Beanstalk: If you're wondering what's going on: the Giant is dead depicted by the hand dropping down the sky with blood The Golden Egg Layer Goose is hung dead The Golden self-playing harp is hung at the end of the scythe The Scenery is not all blue and family friendly cloudy And lat but not least, Jack is Jack
- Color-4 - Creativity-8 - Effort-8 - Flow-5 - Background-6
Total: 31 of 50
I gave you a 4 for color because the colors are kind of bland, there are a few brighter colors here and there but not a lot. I gave you an 8 for creativity because using jack the pumpking kind was pretty ingenious I give your props, and the ginats dead razz . i give you an 8 for effort, seems like you put some time into this. Its a fine piece. I gave you a 5 for flow because I feel that the picture is kind of jumbled, though I like how jack is on the sythe. I gave you a 6 for background, because it is simple, maybe you could have put an evil or dark castle in the background. just a thought razz
Godd work
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:12 pm
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- Color-8 - Creativity-8 - Effort-9 - Flow-8 - Background-9
Total: 42 of 50
I gave you an 8 for color because I like your use of color in the bricks on the wall and her entire bed setup. And also i like how the spilled blood looks like grapejuice, I dont know if thats what you intended. I gave you an 8 for creativity because you did put quite a twist on sleeping beauty. I like how she is skeletal and how the prince it decapitated with his head next to her bed. I actually found it amusing. i gave you a 9 for effort, it must have taken forever to first draw it out then color it with marker, I wnder how many ran out of ink before you finished. I gave you an 8 for flow, I like how you have the rips in the curtain and the sheets, and you did pretty good wirth perception to where the room is kind of 3 dimensional, thought you could use some more practice with it. I gave you a 9 for background because, I love the old time feeling in the colored brick on the wall, and how it looks out to the stars, the giant windows. it was really nice.
Good job
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 8:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 2:15 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:02 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:53 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 1:16 pm
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Kuro_nee-chan My entry gonk this is what I get for trying to do everything the last minute...
- Color---7 - Creativity-- 6 - Effort---6 - Flow --4 - Background--4
Total:27 of 50
I gave u a 7 for color since mostly everything is black and I do understand this is taking place in the night but usuall night has more colors like purples and indigos and stuff. I gave you a 6 for creativity,I like the way you portrayed it, but maybe u could have peter wearing the wolf. just a thought, I gave y a 6 for effort U did pretty well but procrastinating usually ends up with a not so great quality, and i know u can do alot better so maybe schedule ur time more wisely. I gave u a 4 for flow because, not to be brash but it looks like th wold is like u know, geeting it on with peter, i think u know what i mean, but i like the wolfs bloody teeth. I agve u a 4 for backgroun I would of liked to see more trees, so too me its too simple then just the moon river and a giant tree.
Overall u did fair, and I bet You can do better when you dont put it off.
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:55 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 5:48 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:56 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 5:58 pm
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