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Just Like a Dream

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:10 pm
Note: This is a SUPER rough draft, so please feel free to make suggestions! Thankya!


Sometimes I dream of clouds
Sometimes I dream of love
And sometimes I dream of soaring through the night sky above

Then one day, I met you.
Now I dream of you and me
sitting on the dock
listening to the ocean waves
and singing with the breeze
but then I realize,
I'm not dreaming
or fantasizing
or lying to myself.
We're really here, and this is really now, but it's just like a dream.  
PostPosted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 11:46 am
Very nice! It does have a choppy, prose feel to it too. Keep writing!! 3nodding  

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