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I Am..

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Emmerah

PostPosted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:15 pm
Randomly thought of this at the bus stop a few months ago sweatdrop Enjoy, and please comment! 3nodding

I Am..
I am the tap of footless footsteps
I am the creaking of a door
I am the sound of timeless ticking
I am not really here at all

I am a breeze that's made by nothing
I am a ripple on a lake
I am a leaf that's gently falling
I am an aimless kind of fate

I am the shadows of the shadows
I am the shadow of the air
I am the something that you don't see
When you think there's nothing there  
PostPosted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:32 pm
very nice... i like the mysterious element in it. mrgreen  

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evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:20 am
I also like the mysteriousness of this poem! Very well done. I am a huge fan of repition like this. Keep writing!  
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