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 Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:12 pm
Brand new to this guild, so please be as nice as you can~! lol
so here we go:
http://fullmetalalchemist18.deviantart.com/#/d32xr9n
http://fullmetalalchemist18.deviantart.com/#/d32lmws (in the arena's, vote please~)
http://fullmetalalchemist18.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d30fruf
http://fullmetalalchemist18.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2v5yea
http://fullmetalalchemist18.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2v61e5
let me know what you think~ <3
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:29 pm
I think your art is good. I'm hopeless about the pricing system though. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:32 pm
EvilandPink I think your art is good. I'm hopeless about the pricing system though. sweatdrop
lol, thanks though~ heart
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:39 pm
*put down the pita chips and clears throat* okay, critique time.
i like them. they aren't bad.
they could use a bit more work on them, i'm sure if you continue to draw they will improve greatly. you're already not that far from being awe-amazing.
i love your detail work though. (something i should dare more into, but don't. x.x so give credit to anyone that has the patiences.)
as for pricing, i would buy them at 35k-55k value... maybe more if they improved a bit more.
i think mainly all you have to work on is the shape of them. so i guess that would be body proportion. i just think yours doesn't have much flow and character to them. they just seem a bit flat and boxy.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:39 pm
xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx *put down the pita chips and clears throat* okay, critique time.
i like them. they aren't bad.
they could use a bit more work on them, i'm sure if you continue to draw they will improve greatly. you're already not that far from being awe-amazing.
i love your detail work though. (something i should dare more into, but don't. x.x so give credit to anyone that has the patiences.)
as for pricing, i would buy them at 35k-55k value... maybe more if they improved a bit more.
i think mainly all you have to work on is the shape of them. so i guess that would be body proportion. i just think yours doesn't have much flow and character to them. they just seem a bit flat and boxy.
fair enough for the harsh comment at the end XD XD jk~
but thank you for taking the time to look at them, i appreciate it~
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