Reap What You Sow

[stealthmongoose]

You fed me sugar, canned food, McDonalds and Grease

You gave me tainted water, unclean air, bound me to my lease

You gave me a broken home, a TV, and electronic diversions

You limited my travel, you shut down my social life, and limited my creative excursions.

You gave me the right to choose, but not to decide, and let your own guilt hide

And now you want me to work for you!?

I will give you low performance, bad grades, bad health

I will give you opposition, survival, and rebellion

I will give you no credit, funds, or labor, and i will create

I will make my own choices, i will decide, and i will expose you


When all of this is over, and you think that you've made me stronger...i'll extinguish the need for people to be strong, and we'll all be strong.  

[Quiet Misty Morning]

Hmm. Seems like you've been through a lot and gained a lot of experience. Keep going. And again, nicely done.  

[shinsgirl11]

I think it could flow better, especially when you said "you limited my travel, you shut down my social life," etc. , because it was so much longer than the other lines. But otherwise, well done.