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What do I need to work on the most?
  Inking, a.k.a the lineart (Too thick? Too sketchy?)
  Proportions (Anatomy off?)
  Details (I know I need to practice hands and clothes wrinkles.)
  Coloring (Shading off?)
  Poses (Too little variety?)
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xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:04 pm
i wish there was a poll option for "nothing wrong".
i love your drawings they're really cute, but i were to choose one that you listed down on the poll... i guess i would say proportion(?).
 
PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:53 am
I see that the first one got a too short arm, but i knew she would stand with a action pose. I do found your anime style very nice  

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:26 am
@Sleepy Ninja: Can you please expound? :3 I draw the head big on purpose because that's my favorite part. rofl But you may be referring to something else. Upper body compared to lower body, perhaps? Or maybe the limbs are too bulky? Or something else entirely? I'd love to get your feedback on how I can improve. smile

@Hardrock Cafe: I copied the upper body part of the pose from a Pose Masters model. And, I guess the arm's shorter because of foreshortening? But yes, I do need to work on that. Thanks for the feedback. smile  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:40 pm
@ahrain: you think your heads are big? o.O i think they're perfectly fine. and nothing is wrong with the proportions. i just picked that because my option wasn't there. i think you're drawings are fine.  

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:56 pm
xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
@ahrain: you think your heads are big? o.O i think they're perfectly fine. and nothing is wrong with the proportions. i just picked that because my option wasn't there. i think you're drawings are fine.


Oh, thanks. xd I'd love to see your drawings too. 3nodding  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:40 pm
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xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
@ahrain: you think your heads are big? o.O i think they're perfectly fine. and nothing is wrong with the proportions. i just picked that because my option wasn't there. i think you're drawings are fine.


Oh, thanks. xd I'd love to see your drawings too. 3nodding

i'll make my own gallery eventually on here. but i haven't had the time to do it. so hopefully by the end of this year you'll get to see something.  

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:58 pm
xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
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xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
@ahrain: you think your heads are big? o.O i think they're perfectly fine. and nothing is wrong with the proportions. i just picked that because my option wasn't there. i think you're drawings are fine.


Oh, thanks. xd I'd love to see your drawings too. 3nodding

i'll make my own gallery eventually on here. but i haven't had the time to do it. so hopefully by the end of this year you'll get to see something.


Awesome. ^~^ There's not much left of this year anyway. Less than two months? Can't wait for Christmas and everything. heart  
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:31 pm
Hello. lol You should start stalking art request threads. Our art shop thread is going slooow. xD  

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:09 pm
Natevaelle
Hello. lol You should start stalking art request threads. Our art shop thread is going slooow. xD


Nah, it's okay. 3nodding We have school anyway.

Do your homework!!!  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:48 am
You should upload your works in you your DA. Your DA is rotting already, you know. =P  

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:21 am
I can't really maneuver in DA as well as I do in other sights. xd I find it quite complicated. rofl  
PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 4:58 am
Wow, it's been forever. Felt nostalgic browsing through this thread. And, I realized... I haven't improved. crying

Here are some freebies I did during the past few weeks:
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I still shy away from details, color objects as if they were flat, etc. But, now that I have more time on my hands (I graduated, yayy!), maybe I could practice more... Hopefully.
 

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 6:47 am
xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
i wish there was a poll option for "nothing wrong".
i love your drawings they're really cute, but i were to choose one that you listed down on the poll... i guess i would say proportion(?).

I AGREE! 3nodding  
PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 7:04 am
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xxXSleepy_NinjaXxx
i wish there was a poll option for "nothing wrong".
i love your drawings they're really cute, but i were to choose one that you listed down on the poll... i guess i would say proportion(?).

I AGREE! 3nodding


Of course you'd say that. lol  

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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:13 am
Latest drawing for my friend Iccolo:

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It's the first I've done for my charity thread, which doesn't seem to be going anywhere. rofl
 
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