Writing, Need Tips and Pointers

[Alektorphobia]

This is a story I am trying out to see what others think. If I get enough feedback and I write enough, I might get it published.

WARNING: Material you are about to view contains "furry" content. If you dislike/have negative opinions/are against furries, keep your goddamned opinions to yourself.

Thank you, and have a nice day
~Asphyxiation  

[Alektorphobia]

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[Isobel Bellamy]

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[Alektorphobia]

Thank you so much for the helpful feedback and intellectual input ^.^