Critique/redline this?

[kordovae]

∫I'm having trouble with the sleeve positioning due to the perspective.
He's supposed to be a bigger (not fat) character, so I'm wondering if I drew him too thin.
Critiques and redlines would be loved.
 

[Yamiko]

Your foreshortening skills are better than mine! orz
And is Russia saying, "BE ONE WITH RUSSIA!" here? XD lol.

Hmm...The body looks fine to me. I only had a few things that bothered me a bit



I added an extra contour line for that one thumb joint where the webbing of the hand pops up. As for the sleeve, I tried...

Other than that, I really like how you did the pose, and you definitely got his nose right.

Hope that helps.  

[kordovae]

∫Thank you very much! As for the sleeve, I'll probably use a ref for it since I can't figure out how to do it. OTL