Spoggly's corner // Try, try again.

[Spoggly]

Remade the sketch based on the suggestions given. ^^ It was hard to do but I think it looks better now..

 

[Errol McGillivray]

Lower your horizon to eye level. A vanishing point that high is awkward for an indoor scene and there's no real depth in the room. It's going good so far. Perspective can be difficult since it's very finite and analytical. Many artists have a hard time with it.  

[Spoggly]

Sorry I haven't posted in a while! >.<

Here's my favorite among my recent pieces... Not so sure what's wrong with her anatomy, but I think it looks ok overall..

 

[lea florens]

She is lovely. smile The coloring of the face and the shape of the eyelashes makes her look positively radiant. I do like the highlight detailing you put in there too.
I do think the forearms tapers a tad too thin prior to the armguards/huge bracelets/things, and perhaps her left thigh could be a little longer. The right ankle, being in front of the picture view as well as a side view, probably should be slightly bigger than the left ankle (further away and rotated).