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Strength of Your Love

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evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:12 am
Strength of Your Love
I can feel my heart beating
So strong against my chest
Going on despite pains and hurts
Ignoring all disappointments
Love gives me strength
Your love lifts me high
Because of you I’ve grown agile wings
Able to soar through the skies.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:39 pm
I love it.  

Emmerah


evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Mon May 24, 2010 8:40 am
Awww thank you!  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:45 am
EvolvingWolf
Strength of Your Love
I can feel my heart beating
So strong against my chest
Going on despite pains and hurts
Ignoring all disappointments
Love gives me strength
Your love lifts me high
Because of you I’ve grown agile wings
Able to soar through the skies.


I think it's cliche, to be 100% honest. I've read stuff like this many times. Don't be afraid to step out of the box.  

Animosh


evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:40 am
Thank you for the feedback Barefoot Shepherdess! I encourage you to check out my other poems on my Authors Page in this guild. ^_^ Any critique at all would be wonderful! Also, some of my pieces that I have not put in this guild are in my profile journal. I hope you have a wonderful day!  
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