My Converse and His Army Boots.

[iiEatCandii]

A hurting heart healed by his sweet lips.
All my fear inside, purged, when his hands rest on my hips.
I gaze into his eyes and get lost in his beautiful soul.
This feeling I have for him is something that is difficult to be told.
When I hold him close I feel his heart beat with mine.
So long as he’s with me, I know everything will be fine.

 

[Jareths Girl_24TTW]

That is really good. I love it!  

[EstoPerpetua]

Awww! Very sweet. The rhyme scheme is good, the poem flows nicely, and it is clearly about a topic you feel strongly about. My only complaints are: 1. I feel that there should be more to it; 2. It is very nice, but it's not necessarily unique to you. I'd add more that says purely you. Many people write about love, or lost love, or found love. What you should do is make a poem that leaves a very lasting mark on the reader, and makes them say, "I am going to remember this, and tell people about it." All in all, it really is a great poem. This is me being extremely critical and hypocritical. Anyway, it really is a good work and I would be happy to read more!