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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:18 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 2:41 pm
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Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Great rhyme scheme, great rhythm, great poem. You really should take a break from lost love way more often, because this is a fantastic work. I hate to admit this, but I can't really figure out what this is about sweatdrop , I feel really stupid right now, please excuse my ignorance. I like the words and the way they almost move and flow, but still, I can't find the core of it all, what it's REALLY about. Anyway, keep up the fantasmic work, I'd love to read more!
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 4:54 am
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kapow123 Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Great rhyme scheme, great rhythm, great poem. You really should take a break from lost love way more often, because this is a fantastic work. I hate to admit this, but I can't really figure out what this is about sweatdrop , I feel really stupid right now, please excuse my ignorance. I like the words and the way they almost move and flow, but still, I can't find the core of it all, what it's REALLY about. Anyway, keep up the fantasmic work, I'd love to read more!
thanks so much. I checked my comments and was just expecting another one sentence type thing, then i saw it and i was like. WOAH! I got's praise ~ heart I actually just started with no inspiration at all, then decided on a theme. Maybe it's just me who thinks it's obvious.. since i wrote it, but it's actually about child abuse. And i could go into my uber long speech on my opinion on the matter. But I'll save that for debating sweatdrop ...
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:13 am
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