Alone~ The song I've been working on

[Julienne Dreams]

Here's the lyrics for my song 'Alone'. I wrote it because I felt locked up, wandering aimlessly for eternity looking for hope and a reason to live.

Oh...

I lie in the doorway...
No-one comes to find me in the empty darkness
Can you hear me?
My voice echoes through the shadows
And I wander though my empty thoughts aimlessly

Shadows follow me and I feel nothing
I wander in the darkness without an end
I try to find you waiting somewhere for me
And I remain silent for eternity

I don't believe you are coming for me
Though I don't believe I'll die alone
I pray for a light to shine at the end of this life
Born alone, die with me
Every death shines without dignity

Alone
Alone in the darkness in the end
Shadows follow me and I feel nothing
I wander in the darkness without an end
I try to find you waiting somewhere for me
And I remain silent for eternity

Alone in the darkness in the end
Shadows follow me and I feel nothing
I wander in the darkness without an end
I try to find you waiting somewhere for me
And I remain silent for eternity

Alone, Alone
Trapped in the dark for all eternity
(I wander in the darkness without an end)

Alone
Trapped in the dark for all eternity
(I wander in the darkness without an end)

I wander in the this darkness trying to find the light
Alone I can't see how to live anymore
Just kill me, I don't want to live anymore
(I wander in the darkness and I don't want to live anymore)

Alone I wander in the darkness and I don't want to live anymore
Keep the door closed
No-one cares I can't breathe anymore
So just keep the door closed and keep it locked
Just leave me alone to wander in the dark
Just leave me alone to die

Alone in the darkness in the end
Shadows follow me and I feel nothing
I wander in the darkness without an end
I try to find you waiting somewhere for me
And I remain silent for eternity

I wander in the darkness and I don't want to live anymore  

[Arc En Licorne]

this is really good. does it have a tune yet? i imagined it with a slow tune that slowly builds in some areas where it should be more emotional like the chorus ninja