Destructob0t: Crit my WIP <3

[fiddledidi]

(will format thread later, it's 5:30am) for now:

I'm pretty sure her right arm is in the wrong place. I plan to give her a little more color and expression, but I would really like some help with the mecha-y bits too, since this is probably my second time ever trying to paint anything mecha. All critiques are very welcome x3

Comments? Suggestions? Red lines?  

[Vena]

I think the bent arm is in the right place, but I think the forearm is just a little too lengthy, particularly where it is meeting into the hand. I think the hand is a bit large too. The elbow could end a little shorter too.

I'm getting a weird message with her straight arm because the bottom mecha bit seems to be curving as if it is closer, but the path of her arm appears to be going straight down.

Looks great though, I love the curve of her torso. nnnngh. So hot @-@  

[lalamariana]

I'm not awesome enough to critique this but I totally think she needs an awesome bellybutton ring. And when painting mech stuff you just need heavily defined lighting and shading ... I guess...  

[fiddledidi]

Thanks for the help you guys x3

Her mecha arm is supposed to be slightly bent towards us... xP