Llama's Sketchbook.

[MarianasLlama]

Current WIP
Crits appreciated.
I never get crits on my WIPs. Ever.
It's getting frustrating D:  

[lea florens]

Hello!
I'm not particularly wizardly at proportions, so I hope I don't say anything ridiculous - forgive me if I do.

At a glance it's hard to tell the gender of the person. The nose and jawline seems pretty broad and mannish, and they have a bit of flab, so it's a guess between a tomboyish girl and a slightly pudgy guy with man boobs. Or maybe that's exactly the look you're after.
Nice detailing on the face - though alittle more needed for the hands to define the length of fingers/hand angle/relation to forearm.
The thighs could be alittle longer - should probably be roughly of similar length to the shins/calves.  

[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again



Thanks for the feedback!

I was thinking kindof like a masculine woman, but not to an androgynous extent xD

Maybe I'll change the nose, and hopefully that helps a bit x:



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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again





Update.
Still looks like a tranny emo

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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again





Isalldone

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[Mlle Farouche]

I would say that the main things hindering this piece artwork are the bold, thick lines. Try not to delineate so much but instead focus on the real shapes and forms you are trying to achieve.
I also would've liked to see her in some sort of atmosphere? Even a hint of her shadow would've been nice. She's just sort of there, in a white empty void, which probably isn't helped by the thick outline.
In general, though, not bad. And you did pretty well regarding her proportions.  

[MarianasLlama]

Mlle Farouche

I would say that the main things hindering this piece artwork are the bold, thick lines. Try not to delineate so much but instead focus on the real shapes and forms you are trying to achieve.
I also would've liked to see her in some sort of atmosphere? Even a hint of her shadow would've been nice. She's just sort of there, in a white empty void, which probably isn't helped by the thick outline.
In general, though, not bad. And you did pretty well regarding her proportions.

I've gotten over it over and over again





Hm, okay!
I haven't quite figured out how to achieve nice looking lineart just yet ._.


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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again



In the second post of this thread I have all of my gestures and sketches and stuff.

/Too lazy to post them all here as well ><

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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again



Found a finished piece from almost exactly a year ago

It's large

Compared to my most recent work:



...Improvement?

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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again



New WIP:

Full picture

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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again





Updated, still a WIP

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[MarianasLlama]

I've gotten over it over and over again




Latest update to the WIP
I have been slooowly working on this for EVER.
I'm lazy.

Also I just screencap'd it because saving and uploading the full sized image would take for EVER.
so sorry about the bad quality.

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