I write with your words. [Requests.]

[Kindless]

Long time no see.

I'm back to work as usual, but I have a new twist.

I ask each of you for one simple word, a common, english word.

With that word I will twist it and use it in my own style to write a peice of work on that.

Let's keep it to one word per person per day.

Any first requests?

To read previous works.  

[SaraDiva728]

How about "murder"? I'm working with something along that line, so seeing what you do with it should be interesting.  

[Emmerah]

how about..... 'over' . We're doing a similar thing in english, but we had to choose a word from a hat... i got 'over' and now i have no clue what to do with it... sweatdrop  

[EstoPerpetua]

hmmmm..... what about salvation  

[Kindless]

Sorry for a late responce.

I'll begin work on SaraDiva728' Murder first, and continue from order from there on.

(Although first I've got to post a stickey in this subforum.)  

[Kindless]

SaraDiva728's "Murder".

Murder.

Touch me,
Run those fingertips over me.
Go ahead.
Allow your lust to bubble up.
Let the feeling infect your mind.
Become blind with such an emotion.
Such a powerful want.
Admire my body and touch my flesh.
Allow the lust to overtake you.
Allow it to blind you.
To blind you from the fact.
Tonight is your last night alive.

You touch the skin,
And watch the light dance from it's pale texture.
The soft delicate sweep.
The adoration in your eyes.
Your movments becoming less sensual.
Your movments becoming more lustful.
Look at those adorable eyes glint with want.
Look at that strong body become weakend by lust.
Look at that,
Such a sad fool.

I say I'd like to try something new.
I'd like to make gentle cuts along your body.
Your lust filled mind nods gently.
So you were to lay down.
Your naked body below me.
Your hands tied back to stop your struggle.
Your face staring at my body with such joy.

Oh? Little cuts?
Yes, it's safe.
I won't let you die too quickly.  

[Stelle Cadenti]

This looks like great fun.

Kindless, I always get shivers reading your poetry. Disturbingly beautiful.  

[SaraDiva728]

Wow! Sxx and betrayal with an unsuspecting victim. GENIUS!! It was an awesome and inspiring read, I can't wait to read more of your work! whee  

[evolvingwolf]

Oh my gosh, your poem is absolutely stunning! I really love that you took such a simple word and turned it into this beautifully detailed piece. As for word suggestions, how about my favorite word "eloquence"? ^_^ Keep up the amazing work!  

[SaraDiva728]

I want another one! I want another one! How about... Forsaken. There is a song by that name that I love and the word itself seems right up your alley. Plus, how often is that done? There's sap about abandonment and oh-he/she-left-me blah blah bleh, but what is it to be forsaken? Or to forsake someone else? Its a thought...