Ransom Note
I stole your heart and you can’t have it back.
It’s only just -- you did start this affair.
However: If you can promise me one thing,
A single little trinket, maybe we can share
If you give me a circlet that does “sing”
Then my heart may be saved an attack.
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I like the rhyme scheme but I feel like I'm trying to hard to force it into the pattern which is messing up the flow. xP
Criticize as hard as you can, yes?
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