nightcrawler wip

[Ebony Bunny]

I messed up, especially with the lines crying

colors messed up when i uploaded it~  

[xobooka]

I think the lines look fine! ^_^
the only thing that might look off are the eyes - his right one, especially. It's not a profile shot/view so it should be a little smaller than the other one *_*
hmm, or maybe they're just too close to each other, or too big??

Maybe also work/shape out the nose?

Either than that, i think it's looking great! c:  

[Ebony Bunny]

xobooka

I think the lines look fine! ^_^
the only thing that might look off are the eyes - his right one, especially. It's not a profile shot/view so it should be a little smaller than the other one *_*
hmm, or maybe they're just too close to each other, or too big??

Maybe also work/shape out the nose?

Either than that, i think it's looking great! c:

ty, eyes always seem to be my problem area gonk  

[Syrella]

Hey,

I tried my luck at a small redline!



It's mostly just three things that I fixed. One was the alignment of the eyes-- they were at kind of different angles, which was making the image look a bit off. When drawing eyes, sometimes it helps to start with a circle and work from there. Second, I extended and widened the jaw just a little bit. I'm not sure why, but it seemed like it was too skinny to me. And lastly, I thought the neck looked a bit thin, particularly for a guy, so I tried beefing it up a bit. I'd cross reference the neck, though, just in case-- I still struggle with those so it may be off. :3

Hope that helps... good luck!  

[Ebony Bunny]

syrella

Hey,

I tried my luck at a small redline!



It's mostly just three things that I fixed. One was the alignment of the eyes-- they were at kind of different angles, which was making the image look a bit off. When drawing eyes, sometimes it helps to start with a circle and work from there. Second, I extended and widened the jaw just a little bit. I'm not sure why, but it seemed like it was too skinny to me. And lastly, I thought the neck looked a bit thin, particularly for a guy, so I tried beefing it up a bit. I'd cross reference the neck, though, just in case-- I still struggle with those so it may be off. :3

Hope that helps... good luck!

tysm for the help, Im trying to fix the eyes, but i dont know too much about gimp and I always seem make nightcrawler thin because hes extremely flexible xp