CHIBINESS! (plz help... honest critique)

[MearaT]

I drew this picture of the avatars for me and my friend... well, Avatar. I found it and colored it in pencil... and now I'm wondering if that was a good idea.
Please ignore teh crappy scan. sweatdrop

Please critique... I saved an original line drawing, so I can use different mediums, if that would be better. And pleeeease critique (I can take honest criticism, I promise).  

[broken_bleeding_angel]

It's cute. But I'm going to give you a tip. Pictures that are off center are often more appealing and interesting. So when you make/take a picture and the main focus is in the dead center, it's considered taboo.  

[Hester Peche]

It's cute, I mean chibis are always cute...I can't draw chibis for s**t so...yeah good job.  

[MearaT]

Sorry about not responding for so long. Something.. happened. O,o
thanks for the advice so far. ^^  

[Mandy Amour]

All I can honestly say is you're on the right path to getting much better ^^
Art is art, its impossible to be right or wrong, as long as its how you imagined, then that alone makes it a great piece!
remember, peoples tatse varies, and many will try and "critique" but they can only give helpful suggestions, how you develop your art, as an artist is up to you ^^