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Emmerah

PostPosted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:44 pm
something random i thought of whilst i was lying in bed and listening to music.... i still can't think of what word to use at the end though....

If there was one word to say how i feel right now...
But i can't say it
So this charade will go on
As if nothing happened
Just like nothing changed
Except i just can't look at you the same, at all.

If there was one word to say how i feel right now...
But it goes unspoken
Because it's easier not to say
It's simpler just to stay
A flower on the wall

If there was one word to say how i feel right now...
Because you're standing next to me
And the crowd is thinning out
And this feeling is like hell
And i think I'm going to burst
I just want to say it... Hello  
PostPosted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:16 pm
Could you give a little more background about the poem? That would make it easier to help you decide on that final word.  

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Emmerah

PostPosted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:47 pm
Rock4ourRock
Could you give a little more background about the poem? That would make it easier to help you decide on that final word.

hmmm, well, i suppose, she's been watching him from afar, slowly falling in love with him... always too afaid to go up and talk... and i think that question has helped me decide....  
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