Comments and Criticism please <3

[strawberry monochrome]

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❝ Hello there!

I would like some comments and criticism on a few of my drawings, mind you they are not colored or edited, and a few are rough sketch/concepts.









Sorry the last one is so big o___o;; ❞

 

[strawberry monochrome]

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[candid silence]

their pretty good. i like how you make your faces! heart however, you should work on wrinkles in clothes, they seem too big and bumpy to me. that may just be your style though. smile  

[Nintendo Princess]

Those are absolutely beautiful!!
I love your work~ heart heart heart
Especially the last one, she has such a prety face.
KEEP IT UP!  

[strawberry monochrome]

Candid;; Thanks, yeah..my wrinkles are..strange x'D i'll get on that though :'D

Michi-chan;; Aww thank you, that's nice of you to say =]

I wish hands were easier to draw ;-;  

[sweetnbella]

they're all wonderful, but i really like the one with the unbrella and the girl in the dress above that...you're great. keep up the good work wink  

[Ananszi]

I've seen better. But it's also better than what I can do so I have no room to talk. I am not trying to sound rude darlin' but this is just something you have to learn by trial and error.

In the first picture her hands look too.. long. I hope that makes sense. Also, on the hand that she is carrying something it looks like her hand just appears there out of nowhere. And one boob looks deformed compared to the other. But that may just be me.

Second picture the right leg sort of confuses me because of how it is positioned. The skirt ruffles look a little odd. Again, that could just be me.

And the last picture. I like the way her hair looks. The eyes look a little too dark for my liking, but seem to be pretty even.. something I could never do. But alas there are those darn legs again. The left one looks like it should not be bending that way according to the rest of her body.  

[broken_bleeding_angel]

Elbows are at the same line as a womans waist. -3-
The breasts are saggy. They should always be between her armpits and axis/ diaphragm. The chibi's neck is to long. Work on your anatomy more.

Other then that, you're pretty good. Keep practicing. ^3^  

[Matron Mord Sith]

broken_bleeding_angel

Elbows are at the same line as a womans waist. -3-
The breasts are saggy. They should always be between her armpits and axis/ diaphragm. The chibi's neck is to long. Work on your anatomy more.

Other then that, you're pretty good. Keep practicing. ^3^

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[Lieutenant Shotgun]

I agree with the others, work on anatomy a little. Don't worry, I have to, as well.