My Art, Your Opinions. Now. :3

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I just recently made an art shop, so thought I'd show it to see if any of you might want some art or if you can give me some tips or critiques on how to improve. :]
Either would be much appreciated~
Here's the link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/mini-shops/kimoyo-s-cheap-anime-chibi-art-shop-grand-opening/t.52042883
I'm gonna make a banner for it soon, but any help would be nice. ^ ^
Anyway, I also have a DeviantART account (www.xkimoyo.deviantart.com), so check that out, too, please. x3
And, again, any advice or critique is appreciated.

 

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It's looks a bit generic to me.
In other words, you need to expand and develop your own style. Also, don't be shy when drawing hands (I noticed they were a bit small on the full body pictures). I know they're a pain, but the only way they're going to get better is if your force yourself to draw them. And not tiny ones, drawing things tiny is a lot harder.
Myself, if anything the hands end up too big...  

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Thanks for the advice/critique. :]
I really am trying to aim for my own, original style, which I think I've gotten the hang of, as well as with the hands.
I just haven't uploaded any of my new sketches, so you can't really see how much or what I've improved on, so I'll try to get to that.
Anyway, of course I'll continue to practice to see where else I can get.