Title: Heaven then Hell
comments?: yes plz
Poem: as i sit quietly,
in my safe little corner,
i try not to think,
about all those dear mourners.
as the light comes towards me,
it glows brighter and brighter,
with each passing moment,
i feel lighter and lighter.
yet i don't want to leave,
it's too early for that,
but i want to die,
and leave this cold mat.
i float from the mat,
up to heavan i go,
for the final judgement,
that's where it'll show,
all the bad things i've done,
all the people i've wronged,
it's not my fault,
it was only love that i longed.
so i wait in the line,
the long line of wrong-do-ers,
i bet for their mistakes,
they all found the cures.
but me i cannot,
i cannot fix my mistake,
all i did was try,
try to love and then hate.
my name was finally called,
it all happened so fast,
but god then said,
in hell you will last!
so i made my way down,
down in hell i went,
i didn't want to suffer,
and i tried to repent.
i tried praying,
but i only felt hate,
so then i failed,
and met my sad fate.
i suffored so greatly,
from the end of my nose,
and it went all the way down,
to the tips of my toes.
so there you have it,
my sad, cruel fate,
i'll give you advice,
never to hate.
i once was in love,
so powerful and true,
until one day that person,
said 'i hate you'
i went to that corner,
and tried to deal with the strife,
but i couldn't take it,
so i pulled out a knife.
i took that sharp knife,
on that cold autumns night,
and plunged it in my heart,
with all of my might.
i never saw another day,
nor another night,
because at that moment,
there came that bright light.
so all of you here,
who listened to my story,
i want you to go,
and say that your sorry.
even those you hate,
and the ones that hate you,
because if you don't
you'll go to hell too...
comments?: yes plz
Poem: as i sit quietly,
in my safe little corner,
i try not to think,
about all those dear mourners.
as the light comes towards me,
it glows brighter and brighter,
with each passing moment,
i feel lighter and lighter.
yet i don't want to leave,
it's too early for that,
but i want to die,
and leave this cold mat.
i float from the mat,
up to heavan i go,
for the final judgement,
that's where it'll show,
all the bad things i've done,
all the people i've wronged,
it's not my fault,
it was only love that i longed.
so i wait in the line,
the long line of wrong-do-ers,
i bet for their mistakes,
they all found the cures.
but me i cannot,
i cannot fix my mistake,
all i did was try,
try to love and then hate.
my name was finally called,
it all happened so fast,
but god then said,
in hell you will last!
so i made my way down,
down in hell i went,
i didn't want to suffer,
and i tried to repent.
i tried praying,
but i only felt hate,
so then i failed,
and met my sad fate.
i suffored so greatly,
from the end of my nose,
and it went all the way down,
to the tips of my toes.
so there you have it,
my sad, cruel fate,
i'll give you advice,
never to hate.
i once was in love,
so powerful and true,
until one day that person,
said 'i hate you'
i went to that corner,
and tried to deal with the strife,
but i couldn't take it,
so i pulled out a knife.
i took that sharp knife,
on that cold autumns night,
and plunged it in my heart,
with all of my might.
i never saw another day,
nor another night,
because at that moment,
there came that bright light.
so all of you here,
who listened to my story,
i want you to go,
and say that your sorry.
even those you hate,
and the ones that hate you,
because if you don't
you'll go to hell too...