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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:12 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:38 pm
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I can't tell if it was intentional on your part, but the alternating lines are kind of like, I don't know how to phrase this, one is rough, then the next is smooth. Like inhaling and exhaling almost, or waves, that works. I love how that creates such passion, it gets really tense, but then the pressure is relieved, then it gets tense again. Makes for a very good poem, short and sweet.
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:43 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:41 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:16 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:09 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:20 pm
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