'Away'

[Nujunuju1]

Through your blood stained hand and your tear filled eyes
I see your fear, you're screaming inside
So take my hand, I'll share the stain
The forever regret, remorse, and pain
Together ,forever , we'll run away.

Through continents of Earth and the stars in the sky
for now and tomorrow, together we fly
So take my hand, I'll share the stain
The forever regret, remorse, and pain
Together ,forever , we'll fly away.

Though your deed is forgotten , It's never forgave
So I'll always be with you, Together we'll stay
So take my hand, I'll share the stain
The forever regret, remorse, and pain
Together ,forever , we'll stay away.

Though death, one day, will approach, I've been here from the start
So together, entwined, our souls will depart.
So take my hand, I'll share the stain
The forever regret, remorse, and pain
Together... ,forever ,... we'll fade away.

Written by Damian Andrew Hesse

There is alot of Repetition in this one, but I feel it worked out fine.  

[Rock4ourRock]

Being the meticulous person I am when it comes to writing, the comma being a space off aster together every time is annoying haha.

But that's just me.

And with the ellipses in the very last sentence, the commas aren't needed.

Still an amazing poem. Great job, once again = D