already dead (poem)

[Flaring Sunset]

I died long ago
To end the suffering of me--my foe
I remember the first slit I had
My mother told me it was bad
I run away in the night
I do not wish to have this fight
To this world I am numb
To this pain I have become
All my life I have pretended to be
Something fake--it is not me
Go away or I shall leave
For I am not that naive
I run through the dead river
For you can see--it makes me quiver
You stab me in the heart
Soon--I wish to be apart
Through cat eyes I can see
I was not meant to be
My heart is leaking out
Do not carry this about
For I am already dead
My eyes are closed in my bed.  

[Flaring Sunset]

ya, you can post anytime now.  

[Isobel Bellamy]

Flaring Sunset

bump

Please do not spam in non-spam areas, your thread is in no danger of being lost, it will also take a while to get any resonces in this guild, you will have to be patient.  

[OverlordMMM]

..not bad...could be better....but its still good...

Overlord's rating: 8/10  

[Flaring Sunset]

OverlordMMM

..not bad...could be better....but its still good...

Overlord's rating: 8/10

^^thank you  

[Ritsuki Tamaka]

nice! Like he said, could be better, but its nice

Mij's Rating: 8.5/10