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Of Change, My Love

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Stelle Cadenti
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:45 pm
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Of Change, My Love

You are the winds of change, my love
to blow across the land
your breath brings sweet things to bloom
You see all that's been done

Blow into the wind, my love
let the change begin
I will wait for you, my love
Blow in to the wind

Raise your hands and do not fail
Seeing eye to eye
Lift your feet and run away
Here's no place to be

You should chase the free, my love
you have always known
You are the winds of change, my love
so blow, my love, so blow

 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:45 pm
I really like this poem! It's rather sweet. I especially like the line, "Raise your hands and do not fail". To me, that line illustrates what love should be... undying support for your love. Great job!  

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Santinka

PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:08 pm
I have to admire your style! It makes the read very interesting.  
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