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 Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:46 am
in light, the shadows shrink in fear,
in dark, the shadows live right here,
the shadows, too, live a life of their own,
all they wanna do, is find a the right home,
but who are we to stop them?
who are we to defy them?
to love them?
to hate them.
just who are we to judge them?
after all, they're the ones who follows us,
or is it us who follows them?
the shadows alone have the power to overtake,
the light,
the world!
so that god can forsake,
yes when god forsakes us,
so we r no longer thus,
we r the ones, who live in the fear,
so listen all so you can hear!
the shadows together can cause a great plight,
but doesn't it happen,
only at night?
~*~written by, lekkei lioko~*~
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:37 pm
i think it was very good.
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 3:03 pm
_Built_to_Offend_666 i think it was very good. thank you
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:45 pm
..its nice....and well put....imagery isn't bad.....I like it....
Overlord's rating: 8.8/10
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 7:16 am
i like it,id like to congradualte you on getting my attention...i allwase go to threads that have (...) in th name somewhere...overall rateing
((9.8/10))
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:28 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:09 am
*claps* yay! It's good! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 9:36 pm
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