I need your help asian people! D:

[Ayersi]

.:. Help me make a Haiku ;[
Can you add something or help me rewrite it

Snow covored branch
White soft wet powdery and cold
Slowly falls down


I have no idea what I even wrote D8
I just kept thinking
5
7
5 .:.

 

[Encarton]

Haikus are crazy easy O:
They don't even have to make much sense!
5, 7, 5
Just go with the flow!

For instance your Haiku is about snow and how it IS and possibly at the end how its fading away if its falling having started from a Branch.

 

[PyroTurtleZX]

Haikus are easy
Anyone can achieve it
Just keep on trying

mrgreen  

[Meiazure]

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high,

4, 8, 4? That's what I read from the one you have right now. It's in syllables, right?

Hmm. The first two lines are about the snow on the branch, but the last line is how it falls. If snow is on a branch, it won't slowly fall down... it'll probably just lump off because the branch moves from some nearby disturbance.

You could describe how snow is falling from the sky! Or how the branch is covered in white. wink

Like a diamond in the sky,
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!

 

[Ayersi]

.:. I'm failing English D;
Snow covered branches
White soft wet and cold
Slowly flies off?
D8
.:.

 

[PyroTurtleZX]

feuerleben

.:. I'm failing English D;
Snow covered branches
White soft wet and cold
Slowly flies off?
D8
.:.

that's 554.
Make the last line your middle and replace it with "Leisurely flying away"  

[TillxGone]

Snow wonderful snow
Falling ever so slowly
Down to earth it comes.

PHAIL! And you may not take this from me as you will be plagiarizing me. :B  

[Ayersi]

.:. Thank you all for your help ; w; .:.

 

[PyroTurtleZX]

TillxGone

Snow wonderful snow
Falling ever so slowly
Down to earth it comes.

PHAIL! And you may not take this from me as you will be plagiarizing me. :B

Oh that is so mean
Denying him a Haiku
See what I did there?  

[TillxGone]

Am I really mean?
I'm just being a writer.
Nothing wrong with that.  

[Ayersi]

.:. Tilly D8
-bows down-
.:.

 

[PyroTurtleZX]

Yeah guess it's not bad
Hey I just baked a baguette
Wonder if it's good?  

[TillxGone]

Congrats at baking.
You're now a winner of life.
Hope you feel content.

Don't bow down to me.
You're only fooling yourself.
Stand up and go write.  

[PyroTurtleZX]

When writing Haiku
Fly High like butterfly
Let the words flow out.  

[TillxGone]

[Grab inspriation.
Music can inspire you.
Listen to music. ]