New song; Good or Bad?

[Mark Of The Wild]

You know you say you love me
Show me, cure me
this diseased written life
out of my head

find me real
find me crazy
but you know all this if for you

One way in life
One way in hell, some part of me
Is soon going to yell
Drive me mad
I'll kiss you deep

Mind my anger
And everything will be good

find me real
find me crazy
but you know all this if for you

Show me your side
The wild one
don't keep it away

Fear it
hold it
show it

Bring me to the room
Dirty clean doesn't matter

find me real
find me crazy
but you know all this if for you  

[kademonblood]

I think that it has great potential, but without hearing the music I wouldn't be able to say anything. I do note that I can't discern between the chorus or verses or bridge... However, I think that it could make a great song, depending on the music. Keep up the good writing!  

[The Aghast]

I like it.
Put some music to that Mfer.
I would love to hear it.