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Jen Lady Vamp

Friendly Vampire

PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:47 am
I'm not having a good day but i guess in joy it sad Oh it doesn't have a name so ya

Fight to escape, to never reach the top.
Falling down the hole, digging nails into the walls.
Blood runs thick, tear everything apart.
I march on trying to make a difference, it seems every step is a waste.
Stand in my way I'll knock you down, throw me back I'll move froward.
Knock me down I'll get up over and over again.
You'll tire before I lose my last breath, then i return the favor.
You will fall to your knee's just to look up and your last sight will be my bloody face, the last thing you hear is my laughter.
Proving to another soul they should have stepped down.
I will never escape my hell, for I have built it to hide the demon within.
Now it runs free in its playground and I cant stop.
I enjoy these same things for it has poisoned my mind and veins for far to long.
It is me I am her all that remains is darkness,
The only light from a fire within my soul.
The burn for the fight, longing for my love, I will never stop till he is in my arms once more.
Everyday grows longer without him, ever night grow colder.
I have grown used to these things, my mental stability has already been broken along time ago.
Control is not the question but rather when will it let loose on the world.
The only one who can help me, calm me, control me, is too far away.
Even though i know it will be still even longer till i have him once more.
I ache for his touch, i would kill for his kiss, there is nothing i wont do for him.
If only he knew how deep my heart runs for him, otherwise its nothing.
i need to find a way to tell him.
I would rather face to face.
I want to spend every last moment with him.
To have him by my side until the day i die, is all i ask for..............................
what will he say
 
PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:30 am
Dark and evil, thats right up my alley, sept for the needing at the end its my cup of tea muhahahahah  

trui2


Jen Lady Vamp

Friendly Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:08 am
thanks i guess  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 2:58 pm
i love to read poems like that! it's so deep and realistic! I love all of it except the ending line s sort of lame. ANYWAY, good job overall!  

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mangagirl14

PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 10:09 am
pretty good peom. The last line need work though.  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 11:59 am
i love the intensity of feeling  

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