Welcome to Gaia! ::

Friends of English Magic - for readers and fans of fantasy

Back to Guilds

A guild for fans of fantasy books - we have discussions, contests, and games! 

Tags: english, fantasy, magic, book, scifi 

Reply dead threads - do not post
All I want (Poem)

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Jen Lady Vamp

Friendly Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:37 am
I wrote this poem because I was miss my Boyfriend, who is in collage in Va. While I stay faithful to him here in florida, So I hope you as much as I do


All I Want

I want to feel your arms around me in tight embrace,
To Feel your smallest touch of grace,
I want to hear your heart beating in my soul,
To hear your breath warm the cold,


I want to be able to taste your sensual lips,
To be able to feel your hand on my hips,
Those hands so powerful yet it so gentle with my heart,
I want to smell your body so bare would be delightful sin,


I want to tell you, so many things,
What your love brings to me,
I want to whisper in your ear,
To whisper so you would be near to me,


I want to shout from atop the mountains,
To whisper into the roses,
I want to tell the world those three simple words
 
PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:57 pm
Great introduction to the Creative subforum!

This is a very nice poem. I love the line "I want to shout from atop the mountains..." Hope everything turns out okay! biggrin  

Lhia Dunwaith


Jen Lady Vamp

Friendly Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 8:22 pm

Thank you so much..Ya My boyfriend liked that line too and I wish everything turns out okay too smile
 
PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 1:37 pm
You're welcome. Hope to read more stuff of yours soon. wink  

Lhia Dunwaith


Lady Midori

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 6:54 pm
Very nice, very warm and filled with emotion, and a little sad at the same time. I quite like it!  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:49 am
JenLuvSvs6969
I wrote this poem because I was miss my Boyfriend, who is in collage in Va. While I stay faithful to him here in florida, So I hope you as much as I do


All I Want

I want to feel your arms around me in tight embrace,
To Feel your smallest touch of grace,
I want to hear your heart beating in my soul,
To hear your breath warm the cold,


I want to be able to taste your sensual lips,
To be able to feel your hand on my hips,
Those hands so powerful yet it so gentle with my heart,
I want to smell your body so bare would be delightful sin,


I want to tell you, so many things,
What your love brings to me,
I want to whisper in your ear,
To whisper so you would be near to me,


I want to shout from atop the mountains,
To whisper into the roses,
I want to tell the world those three simple words


Oh.. My God, That was so beautiful, heartfelt, and sad at the same time. I could feel the emotion through every word. I hope you will pst more of your poems soon.  

mangagirl14


beaulolais
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:02 pm
heh


it made me feel lustful...  
PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:27 pm
Lady Midori
Very nice, very warm and filled with emotion, and a little sad at the same time. I quite like it!


I agree. It was wonderful biggrin  

mangagirl14


xXDragovian-SageXx

6,750 Points
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
  • Dressed Up 200
PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:05 pm
you are really good  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:41 am
that was really good  

xXDragovian-SageXx

6,750 Points
  • Person of Interest 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
  • Dressed Up 200
Reply
dead threads - do not post

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum