Mermaid Melody Fan Graphic Novel

[Autumn Lucy]

I have recently for the fun of it been making my own mermaid characters, and thought about doing a series of stories based on my own mermaids, but inside are from smaller places of water, like lakes and rivers.

I am actually looking for a few beta readers of this graphic novel, and want a few opinions about the plot when I begin to draw this out. Any takers?

Here's some designs for the characters that I have completed so far:

Lorne's Melody form


Kayla's Three Form Designs  

[Autumn Lucy]

Well, no ones interested, so I'll just post it when I am finished.  

[xxlove890xx]

lol they're okay but aren't their human form hair color kinda the same as their mermaid and transformed color? (for example: Hanon has bllur hair in mermaid form and transformed from and a blue tint in her human hair)