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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 12:49 pm
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So. I made a thread in the PP asking for some crit/coloring suggestions and all I got was fluff about people liking it. Hearing that is all great and dandy for my confidence, but it sure as hell doesn't improve a piece. So, I decided to start a thread here in which I could feature the current piece I'm working on in hopes of getting help. :3
About Cheese: I've been drawing nearly my entire life, but didn't really get into it until sixth grade. Now I'm almost positive that I would like to go into art for a living, and I'm trying to improve as much as possible in my last two highschool years. And I know to do that means, pretty much, hating my artwork. Because only when you're disgusted with what you're doing are you pushed to become better. So. I'm looking for some god-honest crit here. If you see something wrong, tell me; But also, try and give me something to help fix it... 'Cause knowing flaws but no way to fix them sucks. : D [I <3 Redlines...]
Currently, I need help on: http://cheesecube.deviantart.com/art/Pele-72851161
So, I suck at lighting. Majorly. I have no idea where the light should hit, how much should hit, etc. Plus, I'm horrid with traditional media. Any tips?
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:09 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 2:55 pm
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