Sup La Meant "Airy" In Struck, Shun. Update! 12/18 Help? O;

[KotokoPlum]

Thank you! ;D

By moving the arm back, do you mean the whole arm? @ 3@  

[Faithom]

biggrin the face is so cute.

Well what struck me right away is the length/thickness of the arms. The girl's right upperarm feels like it's quite a bit thicker than her left one... lol of course, if she does extensive workout with that one arm... I guess it'd explain it. XD

And then the hand by her face. I think the palm would be a bit thinner from the angle that we're looking at it. It'd be easy to fix.. I just looked at my own hand. Make the line on the left side of the arm run up a bit more and begin the curve of the palm a bit later... If this doesn't make sense... lol, look at your own hand really fast. The thumb side is alrigt.

The leg that's resting on top looks like it would be bout a handspan longer than the leg that's under probably because of the way her torso is turned. Maybe move the butt silhouette of the skirt a bit forward to fix this? Nice pattering on the wood, though. I'm impressed. XD -suck at drawing wooden things-  

[Ishrie]

Very nice work. I love her face.. very pretty.

I think that her torso is just a hand's length too short. It looks like you stared the legs out of the area where the navel is placed, instead of the crotch area.

Lovely details. <3  

[KotokoPlum]

Ishrie

Very nice work. I love her face.. very pretty.

I think that her torso is just a hand's length too short. It looks like you stared the legs out of the area where the navel is placed, instead of the crotch area.

Lovely details. <3

Agggh, too late to fix that. x____x;;

Faithom// Thanks! I'll try to fix those things. O: