Vena -- Open Redline/Critique Thread

[FlipMaester]

redlines and critique?
:T I just want to know if theres anything wrong with it like anatomy and proportioning wise.. also there are no hands on him because I like to do those last cause I suck with them OTL
IMAGE IS BIG SO IM LINKING IT INSTEAD XD  

[Anadalya]

Here is a pic I just started. This is a photo I took because the picture was to big to scan, so it looks strange. But I got to looking at the form and saw that it looked dreadfully misproportioned or something. He will have a suit eventually, so I did something to his shoulders and he is pulling on gloves. Anyways, oh please I need some help!