Rate Marwolfer's Dream Avy Pwease.... ^.^

[marwolfer]

Please rate my dream avy. I really want it, but I think something is off. The items with an asterik (*) are non negotiable.


Total Value: 232,346 Gold
After Exclusions: 208,216 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Elegant Antoinette Wig (Cream)*
Gift of the Goddess*
Gift of the Gods*
Ubi Fan
Gold Promise Ring
Egyptian Gold Anklet (left)
Chyaku Norisu Scarf*
Blue Torque Shades
Daisy's Breeze Dress
Gift of the Gods
Elf Style Pants
Green Work Gloves
Satin Green Pajama Shirt
Ruby Forehead Jewel
Spirited 2k6 Boots
Durem Water Festival Shirt

Thanks! I look forward to your feedback, good and bad!

 

[Handover Leftovers]

6/10

The scarf seems to be overpowering all the other colors.The fan is also kinda misplaced. I'm pretty sure you could do without them.

You might also wanna get a couple of items to match the wig.

 

[Flamingo-Colored Tights]

Handover Leftovers

6/10

The scarf seems to be overpowering all the other colors.The fan is also kinda misplaced. I'm pretty sure you could do without them.

You might also wanna get a couple of items to match the wig.

Took the words outta my mouth...

 

[tokiInc]

7/10

well for me ... i love the colors, bold and attractive. and i know i've never seen an avi like this ... so it's pretty original.

but ... on the down side it looks cluttered. get rid of the fan. and the wig. they don't match and look like extra added clutter. the scarf also makes you look top heavy ... so ... wear it different or get rid of it.

so yeah ... over all ... 7 b/c i really like the colors ... and the idea.

not too bad

 

[penned ignorance]

6.5/1o

Dunno... the colours seem off to me. The scarf overpowers alot of it and you should add a couple of things to match the wig  

[marwolfer]

Thanks! I took everybody's feedback into consideration and came up with a new avy:


Total Value: 254,758 Gold
After Exclusions: 231,028 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Gift of the Goddess
Gift of the Gods
Gold Promise Ring
Egyptian Gold Anklet (left)
Blue Torque Shades
Gift of the Gods
Green Work Gloves
Pearl Drop Earrings
Pearl Necklace
Blood Drop Brooch
Chyaku Norisu Scarf
Blue MehTRO T with Cross
Egyptian White Linen Wrap
Elegant Antoinette Wig (Powdered)
Egyptian Golden Flail
Oxblood Leather Boots


Also, I would like you guys to be more specific. I have a really hard time creating my own avys, so if you could mention a specific item, that would be great! ((or even a cheaper way to get the same effect!))

thnks!

 

[Flamingo-Colored Tights]

I like the new avi a lot better, but I still felt it was missing something, so I did a few edits...





I hope they give you some ideas. ^^

 

[marwolfer]

Okay........................... This is a collaboration between my beloved boy toy/manfriend that took about a half hour of frustration to come up with. I think it is the best so far...


Total Value: 263,206 Gold
After Exclusions: 239,396 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Gift of the Goddess
Gift of the Gods
Gold Promise Ring
Egyptian Gold Anklet (left)
Blue Torque Shades
Gift of the Gods
Pearl Drop Earrings
Pearl Necklace
Blood Drop Brooch
Chyaku Norisu Scarf
Elegant Antoinette Wig (Powdered)
Egyptian Golden Flail
Egyptian White Linen Wrap
Elegant Blue Ribbon
Firestorm Dragon Slippers
Knot Green Top
Egyptian Gold Bracelet
Egyptian Gold Bracelet

WHEW!

 

[Flamingo-Colored Tights]

I don't mean to sound picky, but I would still use some more green, like green tights. BUT if you like it the way it is, then leave it, 'cause in the end it really only matters what you want. mrgreen

 

[marwolfer]

I totally get what you're saying. REALLY. I stuggled with it, but every time I added more green, it sort of overpowered it. I'm drawing off of the Wings, so since they only had a little hint of green, that's all I added...