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[Demn_Prince]

Nice poem.
Here's another one of mine.

Lie

The sun rises up through a blood red sky,like
blood on pavement and another life deprived.
Looking into people's stares,seeming merely torn
and scared.
All these lives been livin',another soul driven.
In the pits of fear and self doubt,all you know
turns into a shout.
A shout of honor and pride,but what you soon come
to know is that life,is a lie.



Thursday,October 11

1:15 am


I'll just put this one on too.
It's called (In Darkness).


In darkness I hide,time slowly aging me.
I close my eyes,my bones aching in me.
Days turn to nights,and all I do is think.
My mind races with thoughts,i'm heading toward a brink.
People all around me,I know i'm so much different.
If I truely listened,people would think i'm officient.

I know it is'nt right,the way i've turned to be.
But the way i'm supposed to be,truely is'nt me.
I'm not like other people,of that i'm sure.
I've grown to have emotions,no more.
Depression sunk in long ago.No one will know,
I used to have feelings below.
I may just be 18,my soul,young and free.But,I know i'm held back,
from all that I could be.  

[Airforce Soldier]

Not a poem I know. But it is my new catch phrase.
Go Dance with the Angels.
My way of telling people to ******** off.  

[Demn_Prince]

Ha ha!
I like that new catch fraze.Probably get me arrested around my town though.Hehe...  

[Rose_the_Angel_of_Death]

Summoned Shadows

@Demn_Prince:Yeah.. you can post poems in here..
@ everyone: Please disregard the poem Mistress S.W.H. Due to recent events,it has been deemed that the one it is dedicated to has become unworthy of such high praise.


Dark within.

From the darkness, shall we crawl
From broken hearts, one and all
Crying out in sheer despair
The souls of the lost
Final breaths frozen in air
Like beautiful roses glazed with frost

Once sealed away by a loving light
Horrific pain, eternal plight
Within me, anguish and rage
Once sent away
But in a single day
revived by those horrid words on that accursed page.

A life shattered at once
A life no one wants
So shall I live in pain
Ne'er to feel love again
Lost and alone, forced by no sin
So shall I be the darkness within.

anwsome xp
sorry fo rmy spelling sweatdrop  

[Tenshi Revived]

Ne', Dweller-Dono? You have the ability to remove posts from other authors, yes? I would like muchly if you could remove the Mistress S.W.H post. My account had been banned for no reason so now I cannot erase it.  

[-Resurrected Writer-]

A part of me wants to post a poem that I got published for being the Division V winner in a statewide contest...
Though I think they have copyrights on it. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post it, therefore sweatdrop
Anyone have any knowledge of copyrights?  

[Shadow__Dweller]

Tenshi Revived

Ne', Dweller-Dono? You have the ability to remove posts from other authors, yes? I would like muchly if you could remove the Mistress S.W.H post. My account had been banned for no reason so now I cannot erase it.

done 3nodding

@Resurrected - if you wrote that poem yourself then you can post it on a forum website..you don't need copyright for that. You only need copyright if you're going to publish it in a book.  

[-Resurrected Writer-]

Kay. Well, it was published in a book - though not a widely-marketed one - and was by me.

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COLLAGE MIND

Images scatter among the folds
of gray matter, beginning to mold.
Overlapping and clashing without rest,
so much trash, what a mess.

Teacher's glasses, mother's eyes,
girlfriend's lips, they all collide.
Fears and worries stain the page,
pictures falling off as the glue will age.

More shreds of thought fall into place,
none of which have pleasant grace.
A melting box of chocolates, a rejection slip,
a notice of debts, held by an iron grip.

The downpour of scraps doesn't end.
They coat every twist and bend.
Gold and rust, moths and flies,
secrets smothered by little white lies.

The ego shifts, it scatters, and divides.
It's a sick swing of cranial tides.
The collage is never organized,
the owner lost and agonized.

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It helps to say that I didn't know a damn about meter when I first wrote this poem. However, I've been told that the chaotic structure is appropriate in this case.  

[Kami Leone]

Ah. It's good to be back..  

[Shadow__Dweller]

@resurrected.
That's a cool poem. The fact that the meter is chaotic DOES suit the subject matter. I like some verses more than others due to the meter, for instance I like the first stanza because of the meter of the very last line..it's short and suit compared to the rest of the stanza so it stands out nicely. The first two lines of the second and third stanzas also have a nice meter which fits perfectly 3nodding