Kirika's Little cornor

[Kirikachiii]

Think I can get some help pwease! Okay this is a picture that I am currently working on at the moment, I know for certain that the Feet and the face need to be worked on, The pants know something is off but I'm not sure, Okay The thing between his pants and shirt is a undershirt with frills. His cape is off as well but I am not sure what to do. Also does it seem as though his legs should be longer? I was trying for a person around the age of 14. Any help would be appreciated. And yes this is only a part of a bigger image.
 

[Kirikachiii]

bump, i haven't got any critz ....  

[Arachnist]

Here's a drawover, with explanations, that'll hopefully help you.

At age 14, I think his proportions should be the same as an adult, but he would probably have less muscles and softer features.