★ Profile and Negotiable PAs Section

[beCREATIVEorDIE]

duckmasta

You may edit yours to say that Raiton Jutsu effects are slighty increased. We do not allow "by rank" increases.

Thank you Duck and yeah, I can see how upping it one rank would be pretty unfair. I assume the reflex part is okay too? I'll go edit then, thanks again, I appreciate it.  

[duckmasta]

apples g a l o r e

duckmasta

You may edit yours to say that Raiton Jutsu effects are slighty increased. We do not allow "by rank" increases.

Thank you Duck and yeah, I can see how upping it one rank would be pretty unfair. I assume the reflex part is okay too? I'll go edit then, thanks again, I appreciate it.

It is important to assume nothing, You may not have the reflex increase in conjunction with the Raiton effect boost.  

[beCREATIVEorDIE]

duckmasta

It is important to assume nothing, You may not have the reflex increase in conjunction with the Raiton effect boost.

Alright, sounds good.  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

Fenrir Graveheart

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Zeramaru Akasun
Nickname: Zeramaru

Age: Looks 18
Birthdate: ???
Gender: Male

Height: 6'
Weight: 165

Nindo: "Control is the only way to halt Chaos."
Personality: Charming, Intelligent, Calm

Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Puppeteer

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Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 250+20+40= 310
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Pale Blue
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Long Range Combat
• Speed
Weaknesses:
• Close Range Combat
• Physical Strength
Fears:
• Dying
• Being Forgotten

Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Bunraku: Able to use one hand to perform techniques rank D and below.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [2] posts faster.
• Learn kujutsu one [2] posts faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Can use ninjutsu/genjutsu of rank and lower without handsigns.
• Hearts grant Jiongu users an additional 2 slots of the corresponding element.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword
Weapon Range: 21" blade, 38" overall
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: in left hand or on left hip
• Cane Sword


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x10
• Exploding Tags/Kunai x20

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton
•

Doton
•

Kugutsu
•

▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
His history is mostly unknown. He grew up in a rich household but was often neglected. Without many friends Zeramaru resorted to making puppets to give himself the company he was never given.

It would appear I have been forgotten...  

[Motherglare]

Ah, sorry for the wait.
Unfortunately, the Jiongu clan is closed. : / So you'll have to take out one of your personal attributes that relates to that bloodline.
Being a ninjutsu class, you should have about 14 ninjutsu slots available to you. To clarify, could you separate your limitations by elements?
Your chakra pool should also be at 270. The back up reserve of 25 becomes available to you when your main pool runs out.  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

Redera Issun

Ah, sorry for the wait.
Unfortunately, the Jiongu clan is closed. : / So you'll have to take out one of your personal attributes that relates to that bloodline.
Being a ninjutsu class, you should have about 14 ninjutsu slots available to you. To clarify, could you separate your limitations by elements?
Your chakra pool should also be at 270. The back up reserve of 25 becomes available to you when your main pool runs out.

If the clan is closed then why was I approved for the style in the bloodline application? Are you telling me that my efforts were just a waste of time? Isn't there someone on the list who's either dead or inactive? Because to be honest I don't have an interest in roleplaying here without that bloodline. It kinda makes or breaks my character. :/  

[Motherglare]

Early bird gets the worm. The worm gets digested, and in the end, you're left with poop.

If you were approved, then I don't know why your name wasn't under the bloodline roster. I'm sure any effort people put in aren't a waste of time, just that it's unfortunate that this happened.
As for people who are inactive or dead, I'm unsure because no one can truly keep tabs on everyone.
And if you truly feel that way, then all I can say is; "I'm truly sorry you feel that way. Maybe next time."
; /
Besides, being a jiongu isn't all that great. You have other great clans, maybe make one if you don't feel at all satisfied with the ones here.

 

[Azeiel The Risen]

Actually red I hate to undermine you but as the bloodline mod, I approved his application because drizz was never taken off of the list after his banning thus opening it back up which then closed when I approved him. So if there is nothing wrong with his profile then please approve him. The two names have been swapped so he is good to go for the bloodline.  

[Motherglare]

I see. : o You're not undermining me at all, not that I know of at least. You can't change what happened over the course of time. : P

The problem was just the list, seeing as how it was full but now that you cleared it up, I can continue.

As for the approving process, he could refer back to my previous previous statement with where I told him the things to edit. Just disregard the part about the personal attribute. Fix those things, and Fenrir can go on his way. : 3

 

[Azeiel The Risen]

Again i apologize for this little mess. I approved his sample before I went to sleep the other day and forgot to change it XD  

[Motherglare]

You're fine. lol I'm sorry I didn't confirm it quickly enough.  

[Azeiel The Risen]

Its fine ^.^ carry on madam ^.^  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

Fenrir Graveheart

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Zeramaru Akasun
Nickname: Zeramaru

Age: Looks 18
Birthdate: ???
Gender: Male

Height: 6'
Weight: 165

Nindo: "Control is the only way to halt Chaos."
Personality: Charming, Intelligent, Calm

Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Puppeteer

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 250+20+40= 310
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Pale Blue
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Long Range Combat
• Speed
Weaknesses:
• Close Range Combat
• Physical Strength
Fears:
• Dying
• Being Forgotten

Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Bunraku: Able to use one hand to perform techniques rank D and below.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [2] posts faster.
• Learn kujutsu one [2] posts faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Can use ninjutsu/genjutsu of rank and lower without handsigns.
• Hearts grant Jiongu users an additional 2 slots of the corresponding element.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Raiton : : 00 / 08
• Doton : : 00 / 10
• Maruton : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword
Weapon Range: 21" blade, 38" overall
Weapon Weight: 9lbs
Weapon Location: in left hand or on left hip
• Cane Sword


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x10
• Exploding Tags/Kunai x20

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton
•

Doton
•

Kugutsu
•

▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
His history is mostly unknown. He grew up in a rich household but was often neglected. Without many friends Zeramaru resorted to making puppets to give himself the company he was never given.

edit
According to the ninjutsu class for genin I have 6 ninjutsu per element. Add that in with the 2 ninjutsu bonus I get from the puppeteer subclass and I have 8. But if I went wrong somewhere and have 14 then hey, I won't complain. ^_^
The doton element has 10 because that is the element supplied by my extra heart. Normally they would have 8 ninjutsu per heart but with the +2 from the personal attribute I get a +2 bonus for 10 ninjutsu instead. In any case I separated my limitations by elements like you asked. Also if my calculations are correct my total chakra amount should be 310 as I described. 250 base plus 20 from my puppeteer subclass plus the 40 I get from the Jiongu bloodline gives me 310.  

[iNishino Inferni]

iNishino Inferni

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Hinako. Just Hinako.
Nickname: Hina.

Age: Sixteen.
Birthdate: 18th of March.
Gender: Female.

Height: 5'3"
Weight: 79lbs

Nindo: "Never Doubt Your Ability To Survive."
Personality: Hinako is strong willed and breaking her spirit and will to survive is not as easy as you make think. Hinako is quite silent at times and is quite intelligent. Her behavior and additude to others is quite harsh and rude most of the time but at the same she can be quite cute and innocent at the same time.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin.
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Musical.

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Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton and Suiton.
Chakra Color: Purple.
Chakra Materialization: Hinako's Chakra appears kind of like flickers of lightning running through her body.

Strengths:
• Bukijutsu.
• Genjutsu.
Weaknesses:
• Fuuton Techniques.
• Agility.
Fears:
• Cooties!
• Being stuck with people who can't survive on their own.

Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
• Class Attribute - Latent Talent: Able to perform techniques rank D and below via instrument.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
•
Personal Attributes:
• Learn Genjutsu [1] post faster.
• Reaction speed increased.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 01 + 00 /03 = 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword.
Weapon Range: 11inches in length and half an inch in width.
Weapon Weight: 13lbs.
Weapon Location: On the right side of her hip.
• Katana.

Summoning Type: None Available.
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x15
• Senbon needles x10

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton
•

Suiton
•


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
-------
•

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
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•

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Hinako was a normal girl, she was born in a good family; a family full of Shinobi. Quite skillful for someone at her age, her parents thought she'd ought to be a shinobi as well. Hinako wears a long orange scarf over her mouth and protects what is hidden beneath, kind of like Kakshi's mask. Hinako holds some great secret behind her scarf which you shall never know, unless you force her. Hinako is quite beautiful; Her voice is smooth and gentle when she's not calling you an idiot and she can she quite harsh on people.

I'm afraid I've been forgotten here.  

[Azeiel The Risen]

iNishino Inferni

iNishino Inferni

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Hinako. Just Hinako.
Nickname: Hina.

Age: Sixteen.
Birthdate: 18th of March.
Gender: Female.

Height: 5'3"
Weight: 79lbs

Nindo: "Never Doubt Your Ability To Survive."
Personality: Hinako is strong willed and breaking her spirit and will to survive is not as easy as you make think. Hinako is quite silent at times and is quite intelligent. Her behavior and additude to others is quite harsh and rude most of the time but at the same she can be quite cute and innocent at the same time.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin.
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: Musical.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬

Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton and Suiton.
Chakra Color: Purple.
Chakra Materialization: Hinako's Chakra appears kind of like flickers of lightning running through her body.

Strengths:
• Bukijutsu.
• Genjutsu.
Weaknesses:
• Fuuton Techniques.
• Agility.
Fears:
• Cooties!
• Being stuck with people who can't survive on their own.

Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess
• Class Attribute - Latent Talent: Able to perform techniques rank D and below via instrument.
Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
•
Personal Attributes:
• Learn Genjutsu [1] post faster.
• Reaction speed increased.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 01 + 00 /03 = 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Sword.
Weapon Range: 11inches in length and half an inch in width.
Weapon Weight: 13lbs.
Weapon Location: On the right side of her hip.
• Katana.

Summoning Type: None Available.
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x15
• Senbon needles x10

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton
•

Suiton
•


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
•

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
-------
•

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
-------
•

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Hinako was a normal girl, she was born in a good family; a family full of Shinobi. Quite skillful for someone at her age, her parents thought she'd ought to be a shinobi as well. Hinako wears a long orange scarf over her mouth and protects what is hidden beneath, kind of like Kakshi's mask. Hinako holds some great secret behind her scarf which you shall never know, unless you force her. Hinako is quite beautiful; Her voice is smooth and gentle when she's not calling you an idiot and she can she quite harsh on people.

I'm afraid I've been forgotten here.

Oh wow I apologize sweets, sorry about that. APPROVED ^.^