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 Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:44 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:47 am
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Not a problem, Shin. n.n
Technically, it's a hand and a half sword. That's the generalization for the long sword. xD Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:48 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:50 am
[ Mana ]
Okie dokies... and... er...
Hate to be the devil's advocate here... but... ah...
*Rinses out eyes again*
. . .
What's up with that story?
o _ o
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:50 am
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Since Rasengan itself is nonelemental, I totally could.
Maybe I will. I'd intended to get chidori, so I could get the variation which would allow me to channel electricity through my blade.
On the other hand... I could make my own variation of rasengan, as it had been marked an incomplete technique. xD Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:52 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:53 am
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! The brief story I put in? Well, I intend to put some kind of common tie between my characters.
I utilized the myth of the four guardians (Dragon, phoenix, turtle, tiger) to forge the idea of four weapons. I intend only two for Zay, however. xD
Most people don't really attempt to think of things further than how they got a weapon. I like to think of its creation. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:53 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:55 am
[ Mana ]
N-no...
I understand that...
B-but...
It's just... worded so poorly... it's got a good deal of what I can only assume are mis-wordings.
x A x
[ Licky ]
Happy Thanksgiving~
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:55 am
Chidengan = death to the WORLD! xd
When I'm a chunin, imma make a customized cane that does random things xd It'll be like a Wand of Wonder!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:55 am
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Or maybe... Rasoriganken. (Mix the fire "chidori" in with it. xD) Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:56 am
Shinsua [ Mana ]
N-no...
I understand that...
B-but...
It's just... worded so poorly... it's got a good deal of what I can only assume are mis-wordings.
x A x
[ Licky ]
Happy Thanksgiving~ The Stars will show us the way!
Yeah... For the most part. I was writing it yesterday while I was really tired. xD
Like I said, I asked you to critique, not approve. 3nodding
Edit: I can't believe it... I made Von-ian mistakes of grammar! gonk
Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:00 am
[ Mana ]
> _ <
Y-yup...
Let me know when you're done~
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:02 am
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Ugh... I'm going to have to punish myself for this. Fawk. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:05 am
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