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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:02 am
All Done Tonight is the night im gonna fall down, and never get back up. there no hope trying to find my way out, im done. and no matter how much i try to find, your smile in my mind, there nothing left, theres nothing there, im all done. Remember me as the one who loved you, no matter what you did. Remember I'm the one who gave it all up, just for you to win. I loved you like no one else could, and thats all that matters, cuz now im done, and im not giving it a second chance. ~Kit
that was a spur-of-the-moment poem...something i had to write....
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:04 am
*claps in the background* great poem!!!
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:06 am
sooooooo new man....it acually sounded kinda like it was rhyming too....
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:08 am
lolz. i have poems in my journal. xd they don't have to rhyme
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:13 am
i know...i usually dont rhyme thats why i was surprised.... i have a journal that is gonna be full of poems then im gonna publish it as teenage poetry about family, friends, love, and life.
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:23 am
o.o sounds good to me. i wanna be the first to read it
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:27 am
|] will do...i will send a special copy down to you first!... read this one Dont you See Don't you see my face,sad Don't you understand what I mean, hating Don't you see.... I don't love you, anymore Don't you see I don't need you, go Don't you see, why That everytime you look at me, open You give me shivers up and down my spine, cold Driving me absolutely crazy, fearing Don't you see I don't want you, away Let me go, far Let me live, life Let me survive, today Because Everytime you hold me close, oh I blush and see, you your sensitivity, sweet and remember when I wasn't broke, fallen and when you talked to me you'd blush, red but now we are no longer, forever friends, together friends, share friends, alive friends, who care friends, a sacrifice friends, a need no longer friends, gone...... so let go of me *smile*
I forgot how much this one meant to me, then i looked back over my stuff in arenas and.....O_O it really digs deep into me now...
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:35 am
that one was somehow really caught my attention. here's on of mine
memories: listen to the open sea, the cool and gentle breeze. listen to the forest, to put your mind at ease. natures life, their music plays, comforting my soul.wishing to be part of it, hearing the soft bell toll. i want to stay here, in this state of mind. where i feel safe, for no one here is kind. the soft breeze wraps me, in the warm summers veil, as i remember the pain, the blood stained on the rail. the wind sings softly, a familiar melody, while i sleep safe, as nature sings to me. protect me from the pain, the sorrow that might follow. the sun kissing my body, the warmth i wish to barrow, wakes me from my slumber. into the world i travel, i know i'm not alone, so i'll keep on searching, for a place that i call home.
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:38 am
i think i favorited that on arena cuz i recognize it!!! i really like it....
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:41 am
lolz. thank you very much. i liked it too, but most of my poems are kinda depressing.
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:48 am
its okay mine are too..... listen to this one Lost Locket
Shining there, collecting dust in the empty room, lays the lost locket. The lusty cold shimmer of its light on the empty dresser. The beam of sunlight through the window highlights the gold frame of such a personal jewel. Inside the letters form the words I Love You. Somewhere in the world a girl sits in a chair, mourning for her lost locket. Once wishing she could repress the memory of her once, but lost, lover. Now that she has forgotten wear her hands have placed it, she crys. Though it is a rememberence of once was, it still meant something to her faithless soul. Now the only thing that shimmers in this cold, bleak house, is the tears falling from her heart.
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:00 pm
I feel like cryin my friggin eyes out right now... *#&%$*#!!!!
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:06 pm
i feel like hugging Cass
*hugs*
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:18 pm
i feel like im floatin on a cloud...?
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:22 pm
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