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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:54 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:55 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:56 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:21 am
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His Majesty Satan Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:29 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:32 am
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His Majesty Satan Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:43 am
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Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune [Hi, they call me Tsakune. I've been a member for a while now but never had the courage nor inspiration to post something in the guild forums.I actually just started working on a small project, a short story and I posted a short excerpt in the romance section of the forums, please read it and post your honest opinions on where I could improve and what I can change to improve the quality of my story telling.] Welcome to the guild, Tsakune! Hope you enjoy your time in our forums. Thank you, all I want to do is improve.
Trust me, we have a few people who actually help people with their work just because it's a hobby. You'll definitely improve in this environment.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:45 am
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Elder Astrauld Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune [Hi, they call me Tsakune. I've been a member for a while now but never had the courage nor inspiration to post something in the guild forums.I actually just started working on a small project, a short story and I posted a short excerpt in the romance section of the forums, please read it and post your honest opinions on where I could improve and what I can change to improve the quality of my story telling.] Welcome to the guild, Tsakune! Hope you enjoy your time in our forums. Thank you, all I want to do is improve. Trust me, we have a few people who actually help people with their work just because it's a hobby. You'll definitely improve in this environment.
The only thing I'm truly worried about would be for someone to see an area where I can improve, but feed my ego rather than actually help me. I just want people to be honest with me, and I do look forward to having an opportunity to actually brainstorm with others along side yourself.
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His Majesty Satan Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:49 am
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Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune [Hi, they call me Tsakune. I've been a member for a while now but never had the courage nor inspiration to post something in the guild forums.I actually just started working on a small project, a short story and I posted a short excerpt in the romance section of the forums, please read it and post your honest opinions on where I could improve and what I can change to improve the quality of my story telling.] Welcome to the guild, Tsakune! Hope you enjoy your time in our forums. Thank you, all I want to do is improve. Trust me, we have a few people who actually help people with their work just because it's a hobby. You'll definitely improve in this environment. The only thing I'm truly worried about would be for someone to see an area where I can improve, but feed my ego rather than actually help me. I just want people to be honest with me, and I do look forward to having an opportunity to actually brainstorm with others along side yourself. Yeah, that's always been a problem for me too. Can't tell if people are sugarcoating everything. And you'll know if they're really trying to help by their replies. They will point out flaws and give creative solutions.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:02 am
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Elder Astrauld Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune Elder Astrauld Tsakune [Hi, they call me Tsakune. I've been a member for a while now but never had the courage nor inspiration to post something in the guild forums.I actually just started working on a small project, a short story and I posted a short excerpt in the romance section of the forums, please read it and post your honest opinions on where I could improve and what I can change to improve the quality of my story telling.] Welcome to the guild, Tsakune! Hope you enjoy your time in our forums. Thank you, all I want to do is improve. Trust me, we have a few people who actually help people with their work just because it's a hobby. You'll definitely improve in this environment. The only thing I'm truly worried about would be for someone to see an area where I can improve, but feed my ego rather than actually help me. I just want people to be honest with me, and I do look forward to having an opportunity to actually brainstorm with others along side yourself. Yeah, that's always been a problem for me too. Can't tell if people are sugarcoating everything. And you'll know if they're really trying to help by their replies. They will point out flaws and give creative solutions.
smile I look forward to working with you then
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 12:28 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 3:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 12:04 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 7:10 pm
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