wolf4life13
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wolf4life13
Writing is actually what I do for most of my spare time in one guild or another. All in all it was well thought out and maintained a steady flow. A lot of people I read on gaia either lack flow all together or get ahead of themselves and either leave out details relating to their surroundings or focus too much on frivolous details.
Windspirit did a great job I agree but Rasen's was okay..
You sound like an art critic..
I'm probably just biased to the usual food tossing and reaction of opposite gender stuff because some of my other guilds' OOC's are like that often so it doesn't humor me. I'll accept that I may be wrong but to my eyes it seemed like just a quick RP with a few standard gags thrown in. I'm not the judge though so I'll cease commenting.
Sorry if anyone is offended I tend to speak my mind though.
No problem Wolf.. I'm not offended..
I didn't really plan on writing it though..and I'm not really a funny person so.. whatever it was fun to write/
