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[VanillaCreamCoveredOreo]

yalie5

GothAlucardFangirl6

~nods~ Yeah. It reminds me of Chobits though....

I thought chobits was suppose to be funny.

It reminds me of something that Dark Chii and Chii would say, like with the city with no people book....  

[_-Mitsubachi-_-Fujin-_]

These are just some poems I wrote quite sometime ago... my feelings on how my life was going those days...

Questions

Saddness
IS that what I feel?
Can that explain everything?
No..
There's to many emotions
To explain to myself
Change
Can I handle it?
I don't know...
There's to many changes going on at once
To many explainations
Fear
Is that in my heart?
Yes...
I feel it everyday
Fear that one day
Everything I've built
Will just fall apart
That I'll loose you in the process
Can I handle that?
No..
Love
Is it there within me?
I think so...
Can we keep exploring that?
Can you never give up on me, please?
Help me change and keep my heart within your hands
AS I do yours?
But please never tell me
You've given up
Lonliness
Will I feel it?
Maybe...
If I mess up later on
Will it go away?
Who knows...
Let the future be and go with the present
Keep everything precious to me close
And cherish it for as long as I have it
No more doubts....

Written May 25 ******** it!

I'm tired of being what everyone wants me to be
I'm tired of living under cover
I'm tired of living in your ******** it!
I give up
I've tried
But it doesn't work
I try to do everything for you
Yet you're ashamed of me?
You take me for granted
You say you're fine with us
Bullshit
Don't lie
To me
Or yourself!
You don't hold me like normal couples do
You don't like to do that in public
You say were normal
But you know we're not
We never will be
But that's what makes us unique
I wish you would live up to your words
But most times you don't
So ******** it!
I just want to stop impressing you
And start impressing myself.

Written October 8, 2005

 

[DudeOnSkateboard]

This is just a poem my sis made up. I really like it, so please don't use it for english tasks in school or anything...thanx biggrin
It's one of those non-rhyming poems

I walk lost on the edge of a cold steel blade
A deadly pitfall beneath footsteps which weave broken lines
Shards of a shattered heart to aid a half unconscious mind
A voice left unheard
And in the darkness left to die  

[Kesna]

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[Kesna]

DudeOnSkateboard

This is just a poem my sis made up. I really like it, so please don't use it for english tasks in school or anything...thanx biggrin
It's one of those non-rhyming poems

I walk lost on the edge of a cold steel blade
A deadly pitfall beneath footsteps which weave broken lines
Shards of a shattered heart to aid a half unconscious mind
A voice left unheard
And in the darkness left to die

wow awsome... how old's your sis?  

[sabre_sword]

I wrote a few poems but I dont know if I want to post em sweatdrop They suck so bad  

[VanillaCreamCoveredOreo]

sabre_sword

I wrote a few poems but I dont know if I want to post em sweatdrop They suck so bad

Post em pretty please!  

[_-Mitsubachi-_-Fujin-_]

sabre_sword

I wrote a few poems but I dont know if I want to post em sweatdrop They suck so bad

I bet your poems are better than mine so do not worry, take a risk besides people will probably like yours... unlike mine crying  

[VanillaCreamCoveredOreo]

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[Syrotek]

Where is that crappy poem of mine....

Oh, here it is~

Quote:

End to Winter Trees

The rising sun lights
Burn the shadows away,
Revealing the tree
That reaches so high,
Yet looks so dead.

No leaves, --
No life.

Peering out the window,
The branches dance
Along the briskly wind.
Life was soon
Blown into the lifeless,
As joy buds its blossom.

 

[Rednal]

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