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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:29 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:15 pm
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Mars raise a lip and huffed. "Good girl" he said, giving her a light little smack, not intended to hurt but to demean. "Now, you'll find a tall wooden cabinet beyond that door, that has everything you'll need to clean on a daily basis, start with this room we're in right now" he demanded, nodding toward the door. "After you're finished with this room, we'll see just what you can cook, of course, I won't be eating it, but I do often have guests, upon which occasions you will be occupying my side and behaving yourself"
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:08 am
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((I never said he left. That post was somewhat better than most of your others, getting better but still lots of room to improve))
Mars stood patiently over her, looking down as she worked. As he was a vampire, she would find very little dust in the house, seeing as how dust was mostly dead skin. Furthermore, vampires were very pristine creatures and so the floor too was nigh immaculate. However, he did still want everything to be perfect about it after all. "Excellent dear" he said, his hands behind his head. "Now, now, don't you go on hating me, don't you go on in spite, it was your parents who sold your freedom away" he said. "Money, apparently was a lot more important than their daughter, for all they know you could be dead" he said gently, as though reciting a short poem. "I'm going to treat you a lot better than they ever did, and I am teaching you your place after all, a lesson you should be glad for"
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:48 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 12:32 pm
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Back at home, talon had stashed away the rest of the cash she had just received, after having turned over poorly handled man and set to work on bandaging her poorly healing body. "I knew I should have just laid there..." slowly she brought the wrap around to the front of her, and pulled at it lightly, "would have saved my self the trouble of doing this, if I had just played dead" talon thought with a sigh. She took a few more wraps around her torso, before cutting the bandage, tucking and taping it off. Eyes closed, she let her hands drop and threw head back, in relief "I can finally sleep..." she thought, feeling the wind from the open window brush against her,"I'll go back after a quick nap..." she yawned "...I'm sure mister 'peaceful' can wait till then."Talon smiled halfheartedly, as she eased down onto her bed to sleep. It was good to have something to laugh about, before the nightmares came.
((lol, cute pic. sondra whee ))
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 6:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 7:54 pm
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Sondra growled under her breath and stomped to the bathroom as she slammed the door hard, making a loud bump. As she begin cleaning the bedroom. She was very pissed off but, saying in her thoughts muttering to herself"Eye candy my a**, as if he-" But Sondra begin coughing, throwing her hands up to cover her mouth, and once she done coughing, she uncovered her mouth. She almost forgotten that she was sick, and was getting worse, but no matter, she will finish cleaning first.
Five minutes later Sondra was done cleaning the bathroom, and was heading towards the door, an till she felt very dizzy as everything begin spinning and, she collapse to the bathroom floor, with a loud thump.
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:04 pm
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((Coughing, not couching, that is a hard one, but remember it because you may be writing it again. Also, after "in her thoughts" you have to put an action, because you never tell us what is going on there. Perhaps you might say "in her thoughts she she was muttering to herself" or "in her thoughts she was saying" and then what she was thinking. You see, in her thoughts is the place, but we don't know what the action is yet))
Mars was insulted by her standoffish behavior, but she seemed to be good at cleaning and thus he decided to let her alone. He didn't want to kill her, at least not yet, she was a fairly valued asset. However, she was very annoying. All she'd done was moan and complain and seem useless since being in the house. The only useful thing she'd done was clean the sitting room, and even that had taken her so long.
He was upstairs in one of the less used bedrooms. It was pretty dusty and had a bit of old filth in it, but it was old and Victorian, it would suit most girls and had a large bed as well as a dresser with a mirror. He supposed she deserved this for now. She'd not have anything nice for dinner though, perhaps a few scraps of cheese and crackers or meat.
Holding a maid outfit at arm's length, he nodded, setting it on the bed. If she didn't like it, well it was too bad for her. Other than her nightshirt it would be the only clothing he'd give her yet.
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:11 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:46 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 9:48 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:57 am
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